Westfall
Kirin Tor
- Really liked Wheat mechanic,
- Bell Tower could use something more,
- Skywatcher could be remodeled into Human, Dwarf makes no sense in Westfall, also Gryphon looks too holy,
- Wolf Machine has same issue. It looks too regal and "expensive" for Westfall,
- Houndmaster summoning Core Hounds makes 0 sense,
- I feel like faction needs at least 1 more unit, maybe anti-mage one
- Legacy (name makes no sense, by the way) should be INT hero in my opinion. You have 3 STR and 1 AGI heroes, and she is more of a melee caster. Also, she is too much leaning into mind control for my taste. I know that she is based on Vanessa Van Cleef, but still 3 out of 4 spell are having the same theme.
Kirin Tor
- Tirisgarde as a name makes no sense
- Technorider is a strange concept. Not a fan, especially in Kirin Tor
- You need extra names for your heroes,
- Archivist is pure perfection of a design, great job
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I did make some changes, but they still look foreign for me, it is indeed a lifesaver to hear from you.





