Defense of Skeletoria Chapter 3 Beta (+ Old Chapter 1) (CANCELLED)

[Mamal]

this map i pretty good,lots of side quests,cool models, some item to find. Yeah i enjoyed it a lot .good job

 

[PMC Revenant]

this map i pretty good,lots of side quests,cool models, some item to find. Yeah i enjoyed it a lot .good job

Why thank you so much! It means so much for me.

Please share this map with your friends!

 

[Mamal]

Why thank you so much! It means so much for me.

Please share this map with your friends!

Thank you dude for making it I enjoyed the story line as well it's only mission one but it's encouraging the player to continue playing the campaign and see where the story goes
My suggestions: 1.its kinda odd that the main hero is agility based, he has armor aura,death pact and acid bomb so he is kinda a tank/strength hero. you might wanna make him strength based or just give him a dmg ability instead of death pact(death pact is pretty boring anyway)
2. The single purge(shaman totem) item is good,but against AI, its not that usefull,i guess a staff of dispel would be better specially since enemy casters have lots of slow.
3.i personally love the idea of lots of cool and useable items and i would love to see more cool items or shops in the next chapters like the first one.
I didint see any bugs btw
And when will u releas the whole campaign? Is it almost done or u just started it?

 

[PMC Revenant]

Thank you dude for making it I enjoyed the story line as well it's only mission one but it's encouraging the player to continue playing the campaign and see where the story goes
My suggestions: 1.its kinda odd that the main hero is agility based, he has armor aura,death pact and acid bomb so he is kinda a tank/strength hero. you might wanna make him strength based or just give him a dmg ability instead of death pact(death pact is pretty boring anyway)
2. The single purge(shaman totem) item is good,but against AI, its not that usefull,i guess a staff of dispel would be better specially since enemy casters have lots of slow.
3.i personally love the idea of lots of cool and useable items and i would love to see more cool items or shops in the next chapters like the first one.
I didint see any bugs btw
And when will u releas the whole campaign? Is it almost done or u just started it?

I just started it and just about finishing chapter 2 (This campaign will only be 5 chapters + interludes). I don't know when I'll exactly release the full campaign but imagine it's gonna be in September (same month as my birthday)... Not sure yet but stay tuned.


You know, I'm looking for someone who can make an enemy AI (base).... If you know what I mean

 

[Tryce09]

Hello!

The idea of a faction of boneman/skeletons is always cool.
The terrains it's good, but can be improved.
I have to agree with Mamal about the death pact, looks like this skeletons aren't cannon fodder and you can't just sacrificed one in this chapter.
The catapult of the skeletons throw meat rather that bones.
What is the point to speak with the optional skeleton? Something in the future?
About bugs:
-A bug that could happen, is that the cinematic that show you the enemy base, your units can walk in middle of the cinematic (and die in a horrible way).
-The rune of resurrection that drop the optional boss doesn't work because the skeletons lacks of corpse, maybe replace it with rune of restauration?

Everything else is fine. I hope to see the campaign, I really hope that get crazy

 

[PMC Revenant]

Hello!

The idea of a faction of boneman/skeletons is always cool.
The terrains it's good, but can be improved.
I have to agree with Mamal about the death pact, looks like this skeletons aren't cannon fodder and you can't just sacrificed one in this chapter.
The catapult of the skeletons throw meat rather that bones.
What is the point to speak with the optional skeleton? Something in the future?
About bugs:
-A bug that could happen, is that the cinematic that show you the enemy base, your units can walk in middle of the cinematic (and die in a horrible way).
-The rune of resurrection that drop the optional boss doesn't work because the skeletons lacks of corpse, maybe replace it with rune of restauration?

Everything else is fine. I hope to see the campaign, I really hope that get crazy

Thanks you, my friend. Feedback like this really helps me improve my campaign.

 

[Undead_Race_Lover :>]

i just made an account and is here to say this is the best campaign i will ever experience when its out i love undead especially skeletons
one more thing can you make it so i can play it on 1.26 if you can thanks very much

 

[shadowhog]

Overall it was a nice map I liked the new undead units/tech rather than just using baseline wc3 skeleton units. Lots of custom models make sure to credit those creators if some where used.

Suggestions:
Skeleton warriors should auto use mana shield when they are trained once the research has been done
oranges attack was kinda weak idk if it was just the number of units that attack or just their hp was low or I just had a decent defense up at that time

 

[PMC Revenant]

Overall it was a nice map I liked the new undead units/tech rather than just using baseline wc3 skeleton units. Lots of custom models make sure to credit those creators if some where used.

Suggestions:
Skeleton warriors should auto use mana shield when they are trained once the research has been done
oranges attack was kinda weak idk if it was just the number of units that attack or just their hp was low or I just had a decent defense up at that time

Thank you so much. These kinds of feedback helps me improve my map making. Also let's just say you kinda expected that orange attack did you?

 

[Maxlaid]

I just passed the map. In general, I liked it, there is no special effort and it is quite pleasant to play. I was confused during the game by the rapid regeneration of mana, but it turned out that an aura was imposed on the units, although I did not understand where ...
When you start to besiege the purple camp, for some reason the fps suddenly drops, but then everything is fine. Also, during the dialogue of the elves, the elves themselves are poorly visible.

I wish you good luck in your promotion

 

[PMC Revenant]

I just passed the map. In general, I liked it, there is no special effort and it is quite pleasant to play. I was confused during the game by the rapid regeneration of mana, but it turned out that an aura was imposed on the units, although I did not understand where ...
When you start to besiege the purple camp, for some reason the fps suddenly drops, but then everything is fine. Also, during the dialogue of the elves, the elves themselves are poorly visible.

I wish you good luck in your promotion
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Thank you deeply for your feedback, my friend. I knew my work would find a place in the hearts of many. Did you check the hero's items? And this is just a beta. Adjustments are still being implemented as I progress through making this campaign.

Edit: Also it would be better experience if you do not use the vision cheat. It sometimes ruins the experience...

 

[averagestudent.]

I really like the concept and the map is very fun to play I hope that your campaign gets completed
P.S. Saphira Whisperwind nice arkain easter egg

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Hello! I have merged the two bundles into a single one. Please update your description or the files if needed!

 

[shadowhog]

Thank you so much. These kinds of feedback helps me improve my map making. Also let's just say you kinda expected that orange attack did you?

Went back and played it again and I think it was just the timing of my first go cause this time orange attack was a little tougher

 

[PMC Revenant]

I really like the concept and the map is very fun to play I hope that your campaign gets completed
P.S. Saphira Whisperwind nice arkain easter egg

Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Went back and played it again and I think it was just the timing of my first go cause this time orange attack was a little tougher

well expect them to be a little more tougher when the campaign is released.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Please update the credits list with all the resources you've used! You can easily do that using the "view resources in use" option.

 

[Undead_Race_Lover :>]

oh new demo map cant wait to check it out, especially on its full released

 

[Undead_Race_Lover :>]

i encountered a bug on demo defense of skeletoria part 3 of your campaign, im getting lag spikes whenever i look at the final gate at purples base and the final cutscene can ye fix it please on the final release if you can it would be so much appreciated ^_^, and i liked it btw, i hope you continue to make this campaign cause im so hype to play it keep up the good work

 

[PMC Revenant]

i encountered a bug on demo defense of skeletoria part 3 of your campaign, im getting lag spikes whenever i look at the final gate at purples base and the final cutscene can ye fix it please on the final release if you can it would be so much appreciated ^_^, and i liked it btw, i hope you continue to make this campaign cause im so hype to play it keep up the good work

Will do, lad!

 

[inactive forever]

remind me when the full version is out

 

[PMC Revenant]

remind me when the full version is out

Noted

 

[deepstrasz]

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[PMC Revenant]

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.
This helps you with the models, skins and icons from Hiveworkshop:

Resources in use by Defense of Skeletoria Chapter 3 Beta (+ Old Chapter 1) (CANCELLED)

www.hiveworkshop.com

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www.hiveworkshop.com

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How to create Melee Maps
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Man, those the description has to be a proper one. What are important features I had to include?

 

[deepstrasz]

Please put the credits list between

[spoiler]
[/spoiler]

or

[hidden="credits list or whatever"]
[/hidden]

You can also write a title for the spoiler tags if you want like with the hidden ones.

 

[PMC Revenant]

Please put the credits list between

[spoiler]
[/spoiler]

or

[hidden="credits list or whatever"]
[/hidden]

You can also write a title for the spoiler tags if you want like with the hidden ones.

Can you altleast give me a screenshot sample on what the description supposed to look like?!

I had a rough day and getting pretty moody lately. Please???

 

[deepstrasz]

Usual Warcraft III units and abilities renamed.
When you reach the human stronghold, the hero is attacked and attacks during the scene.
Try avoiding making playable areas near the map edges as you can see the "sky" and it looks ugly.
The hero is intermitently selected during the cinematic scene after freeing the fortress.
Chapter 1 is kind of monotonous. Could use some more gameplay variety.
Chapter 3 has no description on the loading screen.
Soul Tower's tower upgrades have the same icon.
Chapter 3 is much better than the first one.
Arcane Forge's selection circle is not visible; probably too small.

So generally, it's a nice thing but could use more creative gameplay mechanics, custom spells, less if not any Warcraft III exact same stuff. Chapter 1 really needs some improvement.

Approved.

 

[PMC Revenant]

Usual Warcraft III units and abilities renamed.
When you reach the human stronghold, the hero is attacked and attacks during the scene.
Try avoiding making playable areas near the map edges as you can see the "sky" and it looks ugly.
The hero is intermittently selected during the cinematic scene after freeing the fortress.
Chapter 1 is kind of monotonous. Could use some more gameplay variety.
Chapter 3 has no description on the loading screen.
Soul Tower's tower upgrades have the same icon.
Chapter 3 is much better than the first one.
Arcane Forge's selection circle is not visible; probably too small.

So generally, it's a nice thing but could use more creative gameplay mechanics, custom spells, less if not any Warcraft III exact same stuff. Chapter 1 really needs some improvement.

Approved.

Thank you so much. You know why it's called (Demo and Beta) right? It was bound to have bugs (not to criticize or anything, okay?).

 

[deepstrasz]

Thank you so much. You know why it's called (Demo and Beta) right? It was bound to have bugs (not to criticize or anything, okay?).

Not really valid. Betas and Demos should go here: Map Development
Here, in Maps, we expect properly working and very near completion material.

 

[HuanJuan]

Played both maps, I liked them. Hope one day we can see a campaign or sort of.