A Tale of Two Brothers Chapter 1

[Moderator]

09:31, 17th May 2008
Firelord213:
The cinematic works and you have put effort in it and it breaks no map rule.
*Approved*

 

[Disasterpiece512]

Please give me some feedback on this... I will post Chapter 1 in a few days

 

[Bringer_of_Pain]

This cinematic is well.......
Its good but the stroy itself needs some work. I give it a 3/5.

 

[Bringer_of_Pain]

Oh wait this isnt a model I rate it at a 6/10.

 

[shaun]

terrain: 4/10
dialog: 6/10
story: 5/10
camerawork: 4/10
e*-factor: 4/10
idea/execution: 4/10

well overall it comes to a 4/10
what a pitty that u only use around 2 cameras and the rest is locked to unit and the terrain was dull; no plants; the waterfall was rather odd; some trees and cliffs - a cinematic is always something for the eye, just e few bushes n flowers some stones can make a total difference especially if u use lordaeron summer; i dont know where u come from but have you ever seen a flat forest? give it life
a proper terrain for cinematics takes a couple of hours
i cant tell much about the story but i'll watch the next chapter =)

 

[Disasterpiece512]

seeying your comments so far...i'll have to modify like.. everything in this cinematic except for the story ofc... chapter 1 will take a lot longer to release then expected in this case

 

[Handycombinder]

Its a nice cinematic, and i cant wait till you realese the campaign.
But the terrain was a little flat. Your cameras was fine but maybe you could put some more cameras in.
7/10 I cant wait to see chapter 1

 

[Magamdy]

Wow, this thing is MUCH downloaded...

It was a little plain...

 

[Disasterpiece512]

UPDATED!!! added more cameras and modified terrain a bit

 

[Disasterpiece512]

UPDATED again. Fixed terrain, camera motion and added a song to the background. Chapter 1 coming later today or tomorow.

 

[deepstrasz]

It's not finished. At least it looks that way. Too short and the tension breaks rapidly because of that.