FFARPG: Island Of Twisted Fates

[deepstrasz]

1. Barrow Den's description say it creates a Scout Tower. What is the purpose of this building? It doesn't seem to do anything.
2. Some creeps can get stuck between trees and not be able to attack but be attacked by ranged units/heroes.
3. Why are Treants mechanical? Same with Ancient Protector and other ancients.
4. Sometimes the enemy you hit with range units i.e. the beast master hero, run away.
5. Some of the neutral buildings convert to your side others don't, they simply explode. They also change, so those you convert end up disappearing or getting replaced.
6. Bale Bleakstare's Chain Lightning's title is broken.
7. Balance is definitely off. Some factions have 4 heroes from the start for instance, while others start with a base.
8. The necromancer faction crashes the game after building completion.
9. The Warmill has no description. Same with Draenor Portal.
10. Sacrifice from Draenor Portal needs to target Acolytes. Where do you make/train them?
11. Peasants have Sacrifice that requires the Draenor Portal. Shouldn't this ability be on Peons instead?
12. Most of the human buildings have broken descriptions.
13. Peasant Fabric should have a passive icon. Could be made with: Button Manager v1.8.2

Overall, needs balance, polish. A bit chaotic and rough right now.

Approved.

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[qiVenny]

Thank you for your feedback, that's really important for me.

1. King of Beasts's Borrow den can revive him if he dies (that's how it supposed to be, but there is a bug with revival/removing revivable heroes that i still didn't fixed)
2. Some creeps can get stuck between trees and not be able to attack but be attacked by ranged units/heroes.(They are spawning randomly, just like trees, so there could be bad places to spawn. That happens sometimes)
3. Why are Treants mechanical? Same with Ancient Protector and other ancients. (Is it so bad? It's because most of spells could be used on "Ancient" type classification, like Ensnare, and I didn't planned to make them vulnerable to some spells)
4. Sometimes the enemy you hit with range units i.e. the beast master hero, run away.(Thats one of the features, you have to hunt for some beasts)
5. Some of the neutral buildings convert to your side others don't, they simply explode. They also change, so those you convert end up disappearing or getting replaced.(Yes, this happens sometimes if you burst it down. Not sure if I want to change it, or leave it to make players be more cautionly on capturing them(or having ability to destroy it))
6. Bale Bleakstare's Chain Lightning's title is broken.(Balance is definitely missing, yea, I'm searching for someone, who would like to help me with balancing)
7. Balance is definitely off. Some factions have 4 heroes from the start for instance, while others start with a base.(Legions have defense towers and enough resources to start base building from a tower).
8. The necromancer faction crashes the game after building completion.(That's strange, haven't met this problem...I'll check later)
9. The Warmill has no description. Same with Draenor Portal.(English description is coming. If you play RU version on EN Warcraft, the description would be missing)
10. Sacrifice from Draenor Portal needs to target Acolytes. Where do you make/train them?(Peasants from neutral camps are the "Acolytes")
11. Peasants have Sacrifice that requires the Draenor Portal. Shouldn't this ability be on Peons instead?(No, It's horde feature. They have to hire of capture enemy's peasants to make more orcs)
12. Most of the human buildings have broken descriptions.(WIP)
13. Peasant Fabric should have a passive icon. Could be made with: Button Manager v1.8.2(Didn't know that. I'll do it in next update.)

Thank you very much, again.
This is really important for me.
Hope you liked the map and idea.