Bloody revenge

[krawg]

well enjoyed the mission won't lie it was good i like the eerie sounds hope there's more and great terrain btw

 

[gaurdian of the flame]

not bad at all who knows maybe this campaign can develop into something good in the end however good luck in making this campaign

 

[deepstrasz]

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[muaddib]

i remember watching a walkthrough of some of this. keep up the great work. and thank you for translating, cheers! love the grim dark feels of it.. the spells. enviroment etc. job well done

 

[deepstrasz]

i remember watching a walkthrough of some of this. keep up the great work. and thank you for translating, cheers! love the grim dark feels of it.. the spells. enviroment etc. job well done

But have you played or at least tried it? Rating it, especially so high based on some video is kind of unfair, wouldn't you say?

 

[muaddib]

oh, i played it, my bad on the misunderstanding. at least now i could understand the objectives etc. youtube algorithm was random, and i remember seeing a few play throughs few weeks ago. its quite heartening to see some get translation and love here too

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors

I'm sorry, I haven't been registered on this site for long, so I probably won't be able to contact all the models with their authors, but I'll try to find a few.

 

[JackBlaze]

Can this be played on 1.29.1 or naw?

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

Can this be played on 1.29.1 or naw?

This campaign was created on version 1.26, it also works on other versions, but there were a couple of exceptions when players told me that the second chapter wouldn't launch.

 

[muaddib]

in my case, all chapters worked just fine on 1.31. further feed back i wish to add; at your leisure, i hope you continue this custom campaign. it left me a taste for more! loved the setting and story idea you have woven into. keep up the awesome work!

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

in my case, all chapters worked just fine on 1.31. further feed back i wish to add; at your leisure, i hope you continue this custom campaign. it left me a taste for more! loved the setting and story idea you have woven into. keep up the awesome work!

Thank you, I'm currently working on another campaign, and I will start translating it into English afterwards. I believe it will be just as interesting.

 

[Blasterixx]

I also enjoyed this campaign, it only has 2 cutscens and 1 mission but it was alright, short and sweet, as the others said, the atmosphere was pretty neat with the scary soundtrack, and i actually enjoyed the russian voice acting, it helped the scary vibes of the campaign even more, i have a saying, any type of voice acting is better than no voice acting, you clearly have talent for creating stories and maps, keep up the good work with those!

I played on version 1.29 of War3 and i didn't see any bugs.

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

, any type of voice acting is better than no voice acting,

That's a good point. I was considering whether to remove it or not, but with voice acting, the dialogue timing can be automatically synchronized in the triggers with the MP3 file, which is very convenient. Without it, each dialogue would have required individual timing adjustments.

 

[AkarinKana]

This is nice. Recommended!

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

Hello everyone, I want to inform you that I have already created a new campaign and posted it on another resource, now I will translate it into English so that you can play it

 

[deepstrasz]

Abbendis has a spell named Big Bad Voodoo whose description mentions the Shadow Hunter.
The unit techtree is simply Human, nothing to feel different or Scarlet Crusadish.
Units selected during cinematic mode.
There are two different units named Ghoul.
Disease Cloud can be selected and destroyed.
Linear gameplay.

So, while I appreciate the concept and voice acting, it's just rough and unfinished.

Simple.

 

[The_Messenger]

A simple yet well-done map. It has only three "chapters", two cinematics, and one playable map that offer a brief yet good experience.
The playable map is quite well decorated featuring undead and other gruesome doodads decorating the map that give off a foreboding feeling, like you're walking into a trap and you aren't meant to get out alive.
It is a shame that the experience is so brief and doesn't offer more maps or a continuation of the story, even if it weren't canon to Blizzard's works. I would have been greatly interested in playing a campaign where you were meant to handle the situation with what you were given, no base building, and just delve into the undead infested areas of ruined Lordaeron while Balnazar worked to dismantle the Scarlet Crusade from within.

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

Updated the models, improved the triggers, fixed the bugs

 

[marcuis]

I enjoyed it!

 

[Karak]

- Voice Acting Quality: The AI-generated voice acting felt weak overall. I would have preferred a deeper, more resonant voice for the character Abbendis, which could have enhanced the character’s impact.
- Atmosphere: The scattered corpses and sound effects contributed to a chilling atmosphere that I really enjoyed. These elements successfully add a layer of horror and immersion to the game.
- Modeling: I would have preferred Reforged HD models for all characters on the map. This would enhance the visual quality and maintain consistency, especially when playing on the Reforged version.
- Gameplay Level: The gameplay level introduced at the start is well thought out, providing a balanced difficulty and flow from the beginning, which makes for an engaging experience.
- Cinematics: The in-game cinematics could be further improved to add more tension. Enhancing the story-driven cutscenes could strengthen the atmosphere and deepen player engagement.

Overall, "Bloody Revenge" stands out for its eerie atmosphere and well-balanced gameplay, but improvements in voice acting and visual details could make it an even more immersive experience.

 

[SanyaBelotsky]

- Voice Acting Quality: The AI-generated voice acting felt weak overall. I would have preferred a deeper, more resonant voice for the character Abbendis, which could have enhanced the character’s impact.
- Atmosphere: The scattered corpses and sound effects contributed to a chilling atmosphere that I really enjoyed. These elements successfully add a layer of horror and immersion to the game.
- Modeling: I would have preferred Reforged HD models for all characters on the map. This would enhance the visual quality and maintain consistency, especially when playing on the Reforged version.
- Gameplay Level: The gameplay level introduced at the start is well thought out, providing a balanced difficulty and flow from the beginning, which makes for an engaging experience.
- Cinematics: The in-game cinematics could be further improved to add more tension. Enhancing the story-driven cutscenes could strengthen the atmosphere and deepen player engagement.

Overall, "Bloody Revenge" stands out for its eerie atmosphere and well-balanced gameplay, but improvements in voice acting and visual details could make it an even more immersive experience.

Thank you for the feedback. Yes, the voice acting is indeed a bit weak.. I’ll be changing it, as this was my first attempt, and I couldn’t find anything better at the time. Regarding Reforged, i made it for version 1.26. As for the cinematics and other elements, when i first created it, it was quite rough. Later, i gained a bit more experience and improved it as best as iI could tthough, of course, it could have been even better.

 

[VanAndro]

Wow, that unexpected ending really caught me off guard. I was looking forward to a thrilling fourth mission!
I hope you continue this project one day. The start really hooked me in!

 

[PenetratorGod]

I knew it was a mini-campaign, but the content is very weak. It ends quickly after 5-10 minutes of gameplay. I was expecting at least a couple of hours of gameplay. It's a bit unnecessary to share it as it is.

 

[Zorvaan]

A good and joyful campaign, the most disappointing part is it's short playthrough

 

[The Nightmare Book]

Even if it is short, it's infrequent to see any custom campaigns featuring the Scarlet Crusade. Even having Chasing the Dawn as an etalon for such campaigns, the community still struggles to see the Light of true believers!
What about this campaign? Well, it's short and sweet, AI voice-acting is not as bad as it could be.

I think its okay to do short stories - looking forward to seeing more short stories from you, @SanyaBelotsky!