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ap0: Approved
23:42, 7th Aug 2009
Linaze: Rejected until updated -- First off, the story wasn't very good, there was this necromancer whom we knew nothing about and a bunch on Nagas who obviously hated the necromancer, killed him, then he took the form of an undead naga, killed the naga "king" and.. that's that basically. It also bothered me that the naga king had the name of a WoW boss when this had nothing to do with warcraft lore at all. Furthermore, the switch from 1st person camera to 3rd person was not smooth at all, and is surely something you should work on, and while we're at cameras, sometimes the camera was still for like 3 seconds, which looked very stiff. Finally, the battle scenes weren't that good either, two units attacking each other and some special effects, I suggest adding much more movement.
23:42, 7th Aug 2009
Linaze: Rejected until updated -- First off, the story wasn't very good, there was this necromancer whom we knew nothing about and a bunch on Nagas who obviously hated the necromancer, killed him, then he took the form of an undead naga, killed the naga "king" and.. that's that basically. It also bothered me that the naga king had the name of a WoW boss when this had nothing to do with warcraft lore at all. Furthermore, the switch from 1st person camera to 3rd person was not smooth at all, and is surely something you should work on, and while we're at cameras, sometimes the camera was still for like 3 seconds, which looked very stiff. Finally, the battle scenes weren't that good either, two units attacking each other and some special effects, I suggest adding much more movement.