Oh right. Sorry I forgot about yours. I actually checked it a while ago already.
Anyway, I think your map is good quality, but there were a few points though. There are some screen switches where the screen goes black all of the sudden for a few seconds, while going to a new scene, like the graveyard, the old town, the new town, etc. Especially after creating a good mood, nice fading effects at the right times, this is a big shame, because people will suddenly think 'Hey, is my game crashing?', and they'll lose the mood they were in. Real shame.
Also the camera has t go through the baluster in the prison when the woman is taken away. It's not much and unavoidable when you want to go through, but it's just something I noticed.
It's 'and a child was born', not borned

Finally, it's not what people think about with 'love' when it's about the love of their kids, but it's definitely worth to make people think about other kinds of love then just a man and a woman in any kind of intimate relationship.
All with all, I think (if you fix the sudden black screen issue) this could have a very good chance of winning. If you're not allowed to use that track in your map (I don't know if it's allowed or not), then my suggestion is using Requiem for a Dream. It's a open source track that fits very well with mute video displays (video's or cinematics that have do not use voices) like yours.