Icy Agressions

[deepstrasz]

So, why is this altered melee? Change the tag to melee if you didn't change anything from the original melee.

1. There is not enough build space.
2. There are no mine guardians if less than 4 players are in the game.
3. The map is too small for 4 players. Rush tactics are gruesome.
4. Mine guards should have the highest camp range.
5. You should properly position the height of bridges with SHIFT or CTRL+PAGE UP/PAGE DOWN.

For a first melee map it's OK, but for a good one it's not. With some more practice, you'll make better ones. Please read the links below, especially those related to melee mapping.

Substandard.

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[DestinyAngel]

yes it was missclick by me with the altered melee tag

I know my other map forest map was way better
this was from a quick idea ^^
but for some of your points i have to say:
I testet it with some friends and there is enough build space to do your early game tactics
This map is is not called that for nothing "Agressions" there has to be early game action!
If the mine guards had higher range they would be pulled from the river instantly
And this map isnt final. I´ll will working on when i got some other ideas for it ( there are no creeps at the goldmines with 2 players cause it wasnt planned at the moment that fewer than 4 people play this map)

I´ll thank your for your opinion but i want the people to understand why these parts from the map are so designed as they are.
I´m a man who has deep thoughts when im working with world editor, above all the creep camp and map doodad designs