Forest of Destiny

[FeelsGoodMan]

One of my goblin zappers got stuck behind trees when buying it from a shop.

 

[DestinyAngel]

One of my goblin zappers got stuck behind trees when buying it from a shop.

I´m working for some changes and fixes atm.
Thank you, i will include this immediately.

 

[deepstrasz]

1. You should work more on symmetry (minimap dots: neutral hostile camp and neutral passive building placement).
2. The terrain is flat and mostly on one tile.
3. You should put some unbuildable tiles near/on the ramp close to the starting point so that players won't lock themselves in with towers since there is only one way out of the base.
4. The map is big for 4 players. Militia barely reach the middle before expiring.
5. Mine guardians should have the longest camp range so you don't build towers or any building somewhere near without them engaging.
6. There are many narrow places. You should try to widen them up a bit. It's a more than 2 players map, ground units will have problems moving and accessing paths.

All in all a very good start. Please read about melee in some of the links below.

Awaiting Update.

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[deepstrasz]

This image should give you a hint on what you need to work more related to symmetry:

1. You could use the triggers from this map to avoid enemy players spawning near each other when less players than the maximum are in the game: Skeletal Coast v1.3
   
2. Mine guards still don't have the longest camp range. Select them->properties/double click/Enter and set the camp range at the bottom of the popped up menu. Also, move mine guards nearer to the mine as possible so they won't attack players too easily.
3. You should ease the middle up a little. Thin the tree lines a bit for proper infantry mobility.
   
4. Fountains should be better protected.

Approved.

(previous comments: Forest of Destiny)