Catholics V2.0

[FlameofChange]

Hello there, i felt free to do some changes in some mechanics. To put it simple it does the same but in a more compact algorithm (and also deleted some unit group leaks and useless triggers).

Here's the feedback :
☼ Early troops might have a too cheap price compared to their potential.
☼ Spanish human captain voice is funny to be honest.
☼ Economical upgrade should only affect wood (for gold it would be broken)
☼ The Victory trigger is messy, it's hard to understand the logic (or it's a scraped mechanic which may be upgraded later, who knows ?)
☼ Watch out for effects leaks and some misspells, but yeah leaks and typo are common problems in all of the Warcraft 3 maps so don't worry about it

 

[Niarfe003]

Hello there, i felt free to do some changes in some mechanics. To put it simple it does the same but in a more compact algorithm (and also deleted some unit group leaks and useless triggers).

Here's the feedback :
☼ Early troops might have a too cheap price compared to their potential.
☼ Spanish human captain voice is funny to be honest.
☼ Economical upgrade should only affect wood (for gold it would be broken)
☼ The Victory trigger is messy, it's hard to understand the logic (or it's a scraped mechanic which may be upgraded later, who knows ?)
☼ Watch out for effects leaks and some misspells, but yeah leaks and typo are common problems in all of the Warcraft 3 maps so don't worry about it

Thanks Dude, I will do the changes soon.

 

[Tanni]

I don't play a lot of WC3 in recent times but I tried your map out and I have to say I actually had a lot of fun with it. I hadn't explored every single function of your race but with the time my friend and I spent on it, it was pretty fun.

 

[Niarfe003]

I don't play a lot of WC3 in recent times but I tried your map out and I have to say I actually had a lot of fun with it. I hadn't explored every single function of your race but with the time my friend and I spent on it, it was pretty fun.

 

[Niarfe003]

Hello there, i felt free to do some changes in some mechanics. To put it simple it does the same but in a more compact algorithm (and also deleted some unit group leaks and useless triggers).

Here's the feedback :
☼ Early troops might have a too cheap price compared to their potential.
☼ Spanish human captain voice is funny to be honest.
☼ Economical upgrade should only affect wood (for gold it would be broken)
☼ The Victory trigger is messy, it's hard to understand the logic (or it's a scraped mechanic which may be upgraded later, who knows ?)
☼ Watch out for effects leaks and some misspells, but yeah leaks and typo are common problems in all of the Warcraft 3 maps so don't worry about it

Hey, I had problems with you Choosing Trigger; so I decide to go back to mine.... Anyway thanks for the other modification, Dude.

 

[FlameofChange]

What do you mean ? It don't work ? I could fix it if you want /o/

Anyway, i won't force you.

 

[Niarfe003]

What do you mean ? It don't work ? I could fix it if you want /o/

Anyway, i won't force you.

Well, It crashed when starting, but don't worry, it works with mine. Thanks anyway

 

[FlameofChange]

It haven't crashed when i launched it... mmhhhh
Maybe you don't have the latest warcraft 3 version ?

 

[Niarfe003]

It haven't crashed when i launched it... mmhhhh
Maybe you don't have the latest warcraft 3 version ?

That might be the problem....

 

[FlameofChange]

The latest one is the 1.29.2
If you have a crack that might explain the problem too :>

 

[Niarfe003]

The latest one is the 1.29.2
If you have a crack that might explain the problem too :>

oh... guy....

 

[deepstrasz]

I guess you should also add your name to the author along BlizzEnt.
You could add some screenshots and write a proper description.

Items don't have proper descriptions. What about values, details?
Tooltip Tutorial
Creating Good Descriptions

You should try to differentiate the techtree more from that of the original Human. For instance, the towers are pretty much the same with small exceptions.
Upgrades in the Blacksmith and Lumber Mill are the same.
Pope's first spell has even Espanol description along with the English one.
Spells in general need a precise description of what they do.
Expiation requires no mana and I don't exactly know how or if it works. Valour also has Espanol in its description.
Altar Boy is a useless unit considering the spells, especially the second which takes so much mana while the unit is weak.
The Saint only has normal Warcraft III spells: Essence of Blight (Obsidian Statue), Spirit Link (Spirit Walker) and Firebolt (Warlock).
Nobles have hero glow.
Hard Wood's icon=that of the upgrade for more lumber gathering.
Catastrophic Tower has Chaos damage, and big one too. I'm not sure how balanced that is against other factions.

Holy Arrow's icon does not look like it can be autocast, you can make it look like that with this program:
Button Manager v1.8.2
also, about icons (importing and all):
BLP Lab v0.5.0
Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
How to Make an Icon
Holly Arrow is just Faerie Fire.

The Holy bomb seems rather powerful.
Guardians are kind of strong for 2 food.
Divine Eye is overpowered. It's basically temporary maphack. Not only that but you get 3 charges per purchase.
Protectorate and Prayer's Fort have the same hotkey, P.
Too much evasion on too many units.
Might want to find another skin or model for that Divine Destroyer. It looks bad.

What's this?


All in all, it's a pretty good touch.

Awaiting Update.

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[Niarfe003]

Ok, I will do the changes.

 

[deepstrasz]

Ok, I will do the changes.

Approved.

(review: Catholics V2.0)