no feedback on my 2nd WIP?
no feedback on my 2nd WIP?
What do you think of my terrain?
Okay here's my first WiP. Keep in mind that this is my first terrain contest
It takes place in the forest of Ashenvale, where the night elves are being attacked by the orcs.
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Feedback is the ulterior reason for posting a WIP as far as I'm concerned.You didnt ask for feedback. Be shore to ask for feedback next time.![]()
Try taking a better camera view, maybe from the side. It's too messy from above.
is that purple fog?
Just to be clear, this won't get you higher marks. Terraining is about making every aspect of your terrain look beautiful, and selecting the proper resources/tools to work with is a huge factor in the equation. This is optional however, and you are completely unrestrained in this matter. I just wanted to inform you is all.no usage of UTM.
Just to be clear, this won't get you higher marks. Terraining is about making every aspect of your terrain look beautiful, and selecting the proper resources/tools to work with is a huge factor in the equation. This is optional however, and you are completely unrestrained in this matter. I just wanted to inform you is all.
Naro, except for the trees you've placed your terrain has completely no environment! Pay special attention to the shore area (both water and ground areas), the ravine below the bridge and the blighted area near the bridge.
Also why the hell are the skeletons lining up to fight the blademaster?! They might be dumb skeletons but the necromancer controlling them must have some idea about tactics!
I'm assuming you don't want your units to stand still and do nothing, so you should get thinking on the animations you want to apply.
Other than that I like the concept you have for the camera and I wish you the best of luck!
EDIT: After looking at your previous WiPs I must say this one looks much better and much more interesting than them.
Also tleno - thanks for the heads up!I'm going to replace the trees with non-blizz trees (except for the big one), and next time I'll remember to save in a better format. Do you guys have any more suggestions?
Now I hate myself for not being such awsome as you, you multitalented and important sir
I'm sorry Khaled, didn't want to insult you, but I just said what I thought.
If you keep on improving it, it will look good, just add more and change camera position.
@idodik: The green fogs are nuclear glowing objects.
The stones in the background are large stone structures, a kind of canyon.