RPG v1.0d

[deepstrasz]

Author and username different. Why? Is this your map? If not, do you have permission to edit and upload?
A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.

Please improve the description. It is not really telling much and hide the images not to cover more than the screen by putting them under
[spoiler] [/spoiler] or [hidden="image number or title] [/hidden] tags.
Read the guides below.

Awaiting Update.

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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[krawg]

man from screenshots this looks horrible no story no real work or effort put into it

 

[deepstrasz]

Most if not all custom icons are green. Please learn about DISBTNs:
Button Manager v1.8.2

BLP Lab v0.5.0

This tool originates from here BLP Laboratory (short name is BLP Lab) is the application for viewing and converting image files. Current version is 0.5.0 build 500 Features: - Supports following file formats: BMP, JPG, TGA, PNG, BLP (supports BLP2 textures), DDS (supports non-complex...

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Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons

"Complete Icon Tutorial with ALL about Icons" Flame_Phoenix IMPORTANT !! After the unexpected success my first tutorial had Creating a Tavern by Flame_Phoenix i was astonished. I never expected my tutorial to have an excellent qualification by the users. In deed i remember trying to go to...

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How to Make an Icon

How to Make an Icon Begin with your template. If you are using Photoshop open the image, and then go to Image -> Image Size. Now that you are there, a window should have popped up. Under Pixel Dimensions (Width and Height) change the drop-downs to percent instead of pixels, and set the input...

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Tooltip Tutorial

This is a tutorial about tooltips and related subjects. So you may ask these: What are "TOOLTIPS"? Tooltips are what you see and read when you try to learn an ability, try to buy a unit or item, try to use an item or ability and information of a certain item or ability, passive or...

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Blacksmith Armour's icon has no borders. You can make it have them with the Button Manager linked above. Same with abilities like Glory of a Warrior.
The zone markers could be units with Locust ability. That way they are unselectable.
Sabertooh Necklaces still appear after the quest is finished and they can't be dropped.
After using Armor Master the spell turns into Assassin Speed and back again after using the latter.
Bridges are too high from the ground. Move them down with CTRL+PAGE DOWN.
No strength bonus items?

While, it's nice at its core, it's simple, terrain needing work and gameplay requiring some variety as it's really repetitive. Reminds of Brood War RPGs.
There are many maps of the genre but better polished or more advanced.
Also, the map seems not to be finished, no quests after saving the king.

Awaiting Update. Please look at the guides below and improve the terrain and polish the map overall a bit. Waiting for the complete or near complete version too.

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BB CODES
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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

 

[warpten090]

Green Icons are fixed and Blacksmith Armour's icon border added.
Locust makes Teleport spell not usable anymore
10 Sabertooh Necklaces will be swapped for 1 lumber at the marketplace after 2nd quest
After using Armor Master the spell turns into Assassin Speed and back again is the idea of map author and is not a bug.
CTRL+PAGE DOWN makes connection of the bridge with the ground goes wrong
After quest 5 there is book of strength ( version 1.0e)

After saving the king, you'll find 3 bosses and then game is completed.

 

[deepstrasz]

I will cautiously approve this map however I'd like to see more improvements in time.