Echoes of the Legion

[deepstrasz]

Username and map author different. Is it your map? Can you prove it? If not, do you have permission to edit/upload?
There disconcerting map tags: melee and RPG? Melee is just ladder type. Maybe altered melee?

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.
This helps you with the models, skins and icons from Hiveworkshop: Resources in use by Echoes of the Legion
You can also upload your map here to generate a list: Asset scanner

The description is a bit thin, could be more explanatory/detailed and have some screenshots.

Awaiting Update.

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BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[Ralle]

@Livepool posted in Staff Contact:

Hello Thank you for your reply on my map.I just want to ask if its everything okay with the map just need to update some things here on hive like get there more screenshots and description is that everything you want to update or something else.(sorry for my english but it is not my natural langugage so im trying my best I hope you reply soon so i can fix the map and playres would play it and have fun on it.)

 

[deepstrasz]

1. The loading screen still says it was made by another person: Boko, not Livepool.
2. Velen has two Holy Light spells. A bit over the top?
3. Lights Army can be used to summon whole armies since the angels aren't timed, don't take food and aren't limited by spawn number.
4. Terrain is pretty much bare minimum. Could check some terraining guides (see links below).
5. Not sure if the map should have fog of war rather than black mask since you can see enemy positions.
6. Fan of Knives and Starfall have the same hotkey.
7. A lot of icons are green during game pause/F10. They should have DISBTN variants imported too. Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons

A cute start but needs work, good theory, sloppy execution.
Simple.