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- Mar 4, 2014
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Cool map, here is a small review.
I played this map for a few minutes and it seems super unique, i loved the dialogue between the frogs as well, pretty funny, my only problem with the map was the delay when you try to move and when you shoot, when i right click to move it takes like 1 second for my murloc to actually do it, and 0.5 seconds for the shooting, which is very annoying, i hope this delay can be fixed somehow, i played until the boss fight with the turtle, i did try 4 times but i couldn't do it, the delay is too hard to play with, but the concept is amazing, i hope you will keep working on it!
Other things i suggest to make the map better:
- When the murlocs talk i suggest changing the text to the color of the murloc that is speaking, for exemple: (when Ergl (the yellow murloc) speaks his text is yellow, when Flargl (the blue murloc) speaks, his text is blue).
This way the players can know better who is speaking to match better with the visuals as well.
Regarding the text, i wonder if you can make it a little bigger as well if it's possible.
Another small issue with the text during the dialogue is with the narrator text, the first time i watched it i didn't actually notice that was the narrator speaking, so i wonder if you can make it more obvious that the narrator is speaking as well there (but that is just a personal thing)
- And the only bug i guess if you can call it that is this, when the game starts there is this black block on the screen, i assume is not intended
Edit:
- It seems like the map cannot be played in single player as well (i played it in local area network the first time i tested it), after i start the game in single player and the intro cutscene starts i cannot do anything, i tried clicking , typing, nothing, it just stays stuck in that cutscene with the blue murloc line, i tried pressing esc, but that only breaks the cutscene to bring me back to the first part where the yellow murloc swims back and forth, rip.
Other things i suggest to make the map better:
- When the murlocs talk i suggest changing the text to the color of the murloc that is speaking, for exemple: (when Ergl (the yellow murloc) speaks his text is yellow, when Flargl (the blue murloc) speaks, his text is blue).
This way the players can know better who is speaking to match better with the visuals as well.
Regarding the text, i wonder if you can make it a little bigger as well if it's possible.
Another small issue with the text during the dialogue is with the narrator text, the first time i watched it i didn't actually notice that was the narrator speaking, so i wonder if you can make it more obvious that the narrator is speaking as well there (but that is just a personal thing)
- And the only bug i guess if you can call it that is this, when the game starts there is this black block on the screen, i assume is not intended
Edit:
- It seems like the map cannot be played in single player as well (i played it in local area network the first time i tested it), after i start the game in single player and the intro cutscene starts i cannot do anything, i tried clicking , typing, nothing, it just stays stuck in that cutscene with the blue murloc line, i tried pressing esc, but that only breaks the cutscene to bring me back to the first part where the yellow murloc swims back and forth, rip.
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