Hi always nice to see new mappers. It is a good first attempt, but you make a few rookie mistakes (assuming you want to make a somewhat balanced map, if not ignore my comment):
-Creeps should be set to camp stance, except a gold mines, so that they dont attack player units from far away.
-Itemdrops are way too strong. Try to compare the creepspots with ladder maps to find out which items are fitting for which spot.
-Too many dead end where player can get trapped. Main bases can only be attacked thought one entrance. This tends to make camping easy and gameplay very stale and predictable.
-Forest have all sorts of small paths between the trees where small units can hide and not be attacked from heroes.... amongst other things. I've explained this a few times in other maps, like here for example: (24) Legion Mana Temple 1.0a
-Regarding taverns, check the guide in my signature.
-Shop must be easily availlable, i.e. not on a hill.

Hello Mafe, thank you for your feedback.
I will take your tips to heart and try to make it better on the next try.
With the shop on the hill, it probably went something with me, haha.
I thought that could spice up the game concept a bit. Of course you are right.
Nobody would go out of their way in a real ladder match. Wait for my next project you'll see!

1 Star because of description isnt in english.... realy ? mhh... seems thats another kind of feedback. i rewrite the description...

The Dragon Roost has no protection. In general maps with these buildings are avoided by good melee players. Leaving it so, only for good looks turns it into a King of the Hill-esque type of map where players will invest most time and resources to get the better dragons first.
There is little doodad variation, even terrain height difference.
Ramps should have unbuildable terrain to avoid tower closure.

The map is not bad but the design is not impressive or at least catchy. It's pretty substandard.

Take a look at our melee maps and of course those from the original game and try improving yours.

Awaiting Update. Maybe you can do more on this one, if not, new works would be the improvement.


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Thanks for your great advice. The tutorial links are really helpful, so I do not have to find out all the details first. I'll work on both maps again and try to upgrade them a bit. Thank you for your great feedback.

I like how paths are now, not only two through the middle to reach the enemy.

I salute your efforts. You'll be improving subtly fast.

Approved.