Reforged Creations Challenge I

[NightKnight]

I made an easier version (since noobs couldn't beat the first level). Reply in this thread if you want it.

 

[deepstrasz]

Please use hidden/spoiler tags on the screenshots for ease of scrolling.
Use map tags sparingly. Use the most fitting ones. This map's general idea is not Strategy/Risk or Tower Defense. Neither is this a Racing map or Defense/Survival. Is there anything in particular that makes this Co-op? I mean, you can play it solo if you want and finish it, right?
The author is the name of the map instead of you.

1. The night elf hero has the hero icon of the paladin.
2. The terrain could be improved a lot.
3. Checkpoint zones should look alike or more representative.
4. The gameplay is rather repetitive with little differences in what the maze parts are concerned.
5. To differentiate the player units better add glow: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling
6. Cameras should instantly apply to the location the hero is teleported instead of slowly dragging from a map edge to another.

The terrain needs improvement.
Awaiting Update.

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[NightKnight]

The terrain needs improvement.

How so? Do you mean making bigger path?

 

[deepstrasz]

How so? Do you mean making bigger path?

It is too plain, the surrounding zones of the playable region is a flat one tile desert.
Look through the links I provided you and you'll see how to make those places look nicer with doodads, tile and terrain height variation etc.