deepstrasz
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- Not sure about the terrain balance since everything seems here and there and not really symmetrical.
- From the start, one can see it's only Warcraft III material. The custom part is very shallow.
- Defense Engineer has the same icon as the Engineer and they have the same icon. Same: Infantryman, Sniper and Machinegunner. These three also have the same model.
- Morphine (Holy Light) even mentions the Undead and the living...
- Long Rifles mentions Riflemen.
- The Sniper has a mediocre range for its role and not much longer than the other two Riflemen which both have very fast attack and 500 range. Same with Captain. Similar with the Fighter and Bomber. Likewise Bunker and AA the AA Gun.
- Full Mobilization and Chainsaws have the same icon.
- Mortar Team looking alike with Bazooka Team.
- The hero and the Major have Flame Strike.
- All tanks look alike, it's confusing.
- All tanks have Barrage.
- Units should have roles not almost be copies of each other.
- A Bunker that deals heavy damage instead of at least also protecting units? Why is it a bunker then?
Please learn from proper altered melee maps:
How to: Create a Full-working Custom Race
Custom Race Creation: Advanced Mechanics
UB - Ultimate Battle v2.20b AI+
Deforestation of Felwood v2.1.1
Nightborne v1.04
Planetary Domination v2.04
Sands of Time [v1.9]
The Grand Citadel (Racial Issue 1.6)
Or from this one since it's pretty much maybe what you wanted to do:
Tiriath Civil War - Telgarde
Awaiting Update.
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The importance of a Description
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Map Description Making: Good & Bad
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Map Description Generator [1.2]
How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description
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A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided
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How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique
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Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts
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