Heroes of the Storm Cinematic & Warcraft of the Storm

[Paillan]

Oh? So you are the author? Then why does the map show someone else as author?

 

[reforbli]

Oh? So you are the author? Then why does the map show someone else as author?

oh... I forgot to write "reforbli (english name) = 리포블리[W3UMF] (korean name)"

Thanks

 

[deepstrasz]

Feels like a work in progress. Please refer to Map Development until it's close to completion.

1. Can't attack. No idea how. Can't even use items.
2. Even though I selected English, the ability descriptions are null.
3. Many icons look like green squares on game pause/F10.
   Button Manager v1.8.2
   BLP Lab v0.5.0
   Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
   How to Make an Icon
   

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Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
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How to create Melee Maps
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[deepstrasz]

No reply from the author regarding map moderation or playability.
Substandard, I'm afraid.

(previous comments: Warcraft of the Storm Ver0.1)

 

[reforbli]

Feels like a work in progress. Please refer to Map Development until it's close to completion.

1. Can't attack. No idea how. Can't even use items.
2. Even though I selected English, the ability descriptions are null.
3. Many icons look like green squares on game pause/F10.
   Button Manager v1.8.2
   BLP Lab v0.5.0
   Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
   How to Make an Icon

Awaiting Update.

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Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
Paillan
Daffa the Mage
eubz
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Thanks for Review , Sorry for late reply

• Can't attack. No idea how. Can't even use items. => if you click Left Mouse Button, you can attack
• Even though I selected English, the ability descriptions are null. => I made "Skill command help" button frame

  https://imgur.com/a/CdlZ3ul

• Many icons look like green squares on game pause/F10. => Solved

 

[deepstrasz]

Hey, have you added more stuff to the map or is it just the same heroes and blank terrain as before?

 

[reforbli]

Hey, have you added more stuff to the map or is it just the same heroes and blank terrain as before?

I attached ver0.1 in Dec 18, 2019
I attached ver0.3 in May 9, 2021

0.1 version -> 0.3 version


Cinematic is added

many hero and skills is rebalanced and reworked

Tassadar is added
Nova is added

Muradin's Talent is added


Auto Lock Camera System is added

Skill Command is changed
(complex command(ver0.1) => more simple command(ver0.3) )
ex) ver0.1 : if muradin want to use storm bolt, player have to press 3 then press Q then Right Click
ver0.3 : player have to press Q

a lot of FrameUI is added

"overwatch capture point" battlezone is added
"simple aos" battlezone is added


if mob is died, the mob can drop item

Treasure Goblin(hero mob) is added
Blood Raven(hero mob) is added

in addition to those mentioned above. there have been many changes.

 

[deepstrasz]

in addition to those mentioned above. there have been many changes.

Great. You should write a changelog in the map thread description. Read the guides about map descriptions I posted some time ago so you know how to make a nice description.

 

[deepstrasz]

There should be more work on arena types.
Items don't have any names when you hover over them. They also have improper descriptions, numbers and no context.
Abilities don't have any description when you place the mouse over them.

Other than that, it's playable. Some might find it fun. The systems are good but the execution overall of the map could be better.

Approved.