Freezing Havoc 2.12

[kirkask]

This current map contains 2 costume race: Blood elves and Lizards and i currently working on Void creaturs and after that goblins. I would like to say thx to
Gluma for tha amazing lizard models, to wa666r for some of his ability scripts and for the whole comunity for other models and for some scripts, cause only some of the scripts are made by me. If you like this map, im currently working on a Campaing of Lizards wich will be finishd by September 1 at the latest.

 

[xelaro]

I like this map very much, the blood elf late game maybe a bit overpowerd

 

[Fleck]

Hi, just tested your map.

Bugs:
Missing building tooltips for high elven farm.
Pig farm and high elven farm can be built anywhere.
Enchanted Tank research and ability tooltips typo sige instead of siege.
Phoenix Tower build tooltip not consistent.
Phoenix Tower is weak and expensive only dealing 2 damage even with phoenix fire ability.
Phoenix ranger ultimate ability reincarnation is available at lvl 1 instead of lvl 6.

Suggestions:
Use custom models for lizard, elf buildings.

You should also add screenshots and a better map description.
Looking forward to your void and goblin race!

 

[kirkask]

Hi, just tested your map.

Bugs:
Missing building tooltips for high elven farm.
Pig farm and high elven farm can be built anywhere.
Enchanted Tank research and ability tooltips typo sige instead of siege.
Phoenix Tower build tooltip not consistent.
Phoenix Tower is weak and expensive only dealing 2 damage even with phoenix fire ability.
Phoenix ranger ultimate ability reincarnation is available at lvl 1 instead of lvl 6.

Suggestions:
Use custom models for lizard, elf buildings.

You should also add screenshots and a better map description.
Looking forward to your void and goblin race!

Thx very much for your feedback, ill fix all the bigs you mentiond and ill try to find nice coatume builndings, also im glad that you like my map.

 

[kirkask]

I fixed the bugs and the missing tool tips also rebalanced the phoneix tower: very high attack speed lower cost 5 armor and 3 dmg. Lizards got some new costume buildings but the bloodelves won't. The next update after this will contain the void creatures than goblins (that will take a bit more time).
Lizards got a new spelcaster: archmage of flames and lizards samurai "omnislas" abilty is now deal dmg based on agility(including bonus) and fixed the cd bug also cost less mana but attack only 1 enemy and blink times reduced to 10.

 

[Fleck]

What did you update?

 

[kirkask]

What did you update?

fixed the bug with the lizard ssamurai ability about cd changed it dmg to his agility and the ember shaman now can be updated to Archmage of flames, also worked on void creatures but they are un pickuble right now

 

[kirkask]

Please give me feedback about the units and heros, most likely about the balance of the units

 

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[kirkask]

I did a small balance update and listed all the sourcaes i used to make this map

 

[Fleck]

Enchanted Tank unit build tooltip typo sige instead of siege.
Lizard Warrior spinning attack ability might be too powerful. Perhaps 10% chance is more balanced? Just my opinion.
Archer and Lizard Archer' Searing Arrows ability tooltip have [Level 1] in its name.
Stinger's Acid Bomb ability tooltip have [Level 1] in its name.
Flaming Weapon buff description still refers to Inner Fire.
I'm thinking Phoenix Guard's Phoenix Egg ability should be 15 seconds long for balance. And trigger Phoenix Egg to activate automatically when it reach 15 mana like the default Blood Mage ultimate ability Phoenix.
Elf Barracks building tooltip still uses the default human barracks tooltip.

 

[kirkask]

Enchanted Tank unit build tooltip typo sige instead of siege.
Lizard Warrior spinning attack ability might be too powerful. Perhaps 10% chance is more balanced? Just my opinion.
Archer and Lizard Archer' Searing Arrows ability tooltip have [Level 1] in its name.
Stinger's Acid Bomb ability tooltip have [Level 1] in its name.
Flaming Weapon buff description still refers to Inner Fire.
I'm thinking Phoenix Guard's Phoenix Egg ability should be 15 seconds long for balance. And trigger Phoenix Egg to activate automatically when it reach 15 mana like the default Blood Mage ultimate ability Phoenix.
Elf Barracks building tooltip still uses the default human barracks tooltip.

thank you very much for your feed back ill fix thoes mistakes you mentiond, and i already tough about the phoneix guards phoneix egg abilty would be beter if it triggers atomaticly

 

[kirkask]

Tool Tips mistakes corected
Phoenix guards Pheonix Egg HP lowerd 300>200, autmatic resurection after 15 seconds
Lizard Wariors spining attack chance 25%>15% dmg 20>15
Lizard Samurai ultimate cd 10>15 time betwean slashes 0.24>0.04 because if 2 or more of this ability casted at the same time it will cause bug and now the whole time decresd from arund 3 seconds to around .5

 

[kirkask]

New boss in the middle of the map drops a new item
New camera settings
Spoilers contain the details

 

[deepstrasz]

Ember Shaman Training's icon should look active not like a passive ability.
There are two units with Slow Poison. Kills the uniqueness.
Ember Shaman uses a hero model; it has glow and no decay animation->body remains on the ground. Lizard general doesn't and it has no glow.
Round Slash=Spinning Attack. Generally, many units share the same abilities.
Igniting Hands should have a passive icon. You can make it so with: Button Manager v1.8.2
Moving Mode has the same hotkey G as Attack Ground. The projectile impact is smaller than the area of effect.
Burning Shot doesn't really say what it does.

Right now, it's mostly a reskin and mix of current races. There's little custom material. Waiting for a big enhancement before this can be set to a higher status.

Useful/Simple.

 

[lichao001486]

Good job.
And look forward to void creatures.

 

[kirkask]

Ember Shaman Training's icon should look active not like a passive ability.
There are two units with Slow Poison. Kills the uniqueness.
Ember Shaman uses a hero model; it has glow and no decay animation->body remains on the ground. Lizard general doesn't and it has no glow.
Round Slash=Spinning Attack. Generally, many units share the same abilities.
Igniting Hands should have a passive icon. You can make it so with: Button Manager v1.8.2
Moving Mode has the same hotkey G as Attack Ground. The projectile impact is smaller than the area of effect.
Burning Shot doesn't really say what it does.

Right now, it's mostly a reskin and mix of current races. There's little custom material. Waiting for a big enhancement before this can be set to a higher status.

Useful/Simple.

Thank you for the usefull feadback, ill fix the bugs sonner or later, when i have time for it