Water Battle

[Avatars Lord]

1. The terrain is lacking severely.
2. The map isn't symmetrical which gives a disadvantage to some players and an advantage to the others.
3. No starting creeps/Easy Sea Witches.

Check these links:
HOW TO CREATE MELEE MAPS
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
The Ultimate Beginners Terraining Tutorial

 

[Vaduliu]

1. The terrain is lacking severely.
2. The map isn't symmetrical which gives a disadvantage to some players and an advantage to the others.
3. No starting creeps/Easy Sea Witches.

I don't have understood what you are trying say with "lacking"
I have the impression that this is symmetrical because I measured the map when I did
I'm going to make small islands with weak sea witches, but in the future, because I'm working on another map now when I finish it I'm going to redo it

Edit: Please give me time i'm working on something else when I finish working in they, i will work on my HIVE projects
Reedit: Islands made

 

[Althavis]

I agree with @Avatars Lord

 

[Vaduliu]

1. I still don't understand what you are trying say with "lacking severely"
2. I am bad with symmetries

 

[Althavis]

@Vaduliu
1. Terrain is plain and flat
2. I think the left corner is closer to the edge of the map than the other side
3. Sea witches are easy one

Suggestions

1. Lessen the seals at the center or Rework it because the space is too cramped
2. Expand the center or removed the other shops. Most of the maps I played use the center of the map as a battlefield for important resources
and the shop u could make it much nearer to the Starting base
3. Neutral creeps having no creeps just witch seems boring
4. Doodad give your map a little life

That's all. I hope you update this soon it's interesting after all

 

[Vaduliu]

@Vaduliu
1. Terrain is plain and flat
2. I think the left corner is closer to the edge of the map than the other side
3. Sea witches are easy one

Suggestions

1. Lessen the seals at the center or Rework it because the space is too cramped
2. Expand the center or removed the other shops. Most of the maps I played use the center of the map as a battlefield for important resources
and the shop u could make it much nearer to the Starting base
3. Neutral creeps having no creeps just witch seems boring
4. Doodad give your map a little life

That's all. I hope you update this soon it's interesting after all

Thanks for the suggestions i see a 1.2 version coming in this week

 

[Althavis]

Nc one go for it

 

[Vaduliu]

"Thanks for the suggestions i see a 1.2 version coming in this week
Vaduliu, Saturday at 1:12 AM"

I was a bit late in my plans, but here is the new version

 

[Althavis]

Gonnq test this

 

[Daffa]

The map has a symmetry issue for two players at the rightmost part of the map.

 

[Vaduliu]

The map has a symmetry issue for two players at the rightmost part of the map.

Ok, i have not understood what are problem can you show a screenshot of problem, for be easiest correct it?

 

[Daffa]

Try to cut the map into two and reverse one side. You will notice they aren't exactly the same duplicate in term of player position.

Or, you can use a ruler on the minimap and count the distance between purple and brown, then count the distance of blue and light blue. I'm referring to the starting bases.

 

[Vaduliu]

Try to cut the map into two and reverse one side. You will notice they aren't exactly the same duplicate in term of player position.

Or, you can use a ruler on the minimap and count the distance between purple and brown, then count the distance of blue and light blue. I'm referring to the starting bases.

Thanks i will try correct this and upload the corrected version this week

 

[deepstrasz]

Not enough build space.
One tile terrain and flat, little to no doodad variation.
Asymmetry of the map layout. That is not good in melee.
Too many mines near each other.
Heroes used as neutral hostile units; that doesn't make it altered melee but bad melee.
Bad map concept overall, not even close to melee BlizzEnt quality.

Set to Substandard.

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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

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• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[Vaduliu]

Not enough build space.
One tile terrain and flat, little to no doodad variation.
Asymmetry of the map layout. That is not good in melee.
Too many mines near each other.
Heroes used as neutral hostile units; that doesn't make it altered melee but bad melee.
Bad map concept overall, not even close to melee BlizzEnt quality.

Set to Substandard.

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BB CODES
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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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When I finish the update of the extended mode, i will work in this made (and change the description of altered melee for melee)