Unknown Forest

[Zucth]

Well, I have no idea what you are trying to make here. But let say what I think you should improve to make the map be better.
-path are too narrow everywhere
-item drop is OP in melee case I would say no to the difference in permanent and charge item random drop.
-too close gold mines the normal range would be 8+ yellow tile. Goldmine is too much a dead end.
-trees gap
-no green camp near the base

addition comment
-mid look pretty crazy
-playable area reach the shadow part

well let see what other see

 

[Jocke11]

Well, I have no idea what you are trying to make here. But let say what I think you should improve to make the map be better.
-path are too narrow everywhere
-item drop is OP in melee case I would say no to the difference in permanent and charge item random drop.
-too close gold mines the normal range would be 8+ yellow tile. Goldmine is too much a dead end.
-trees gap
-no green camp near the base

addition comment
-mid look pretty crazy
-playable area reach the shadow part

well let see what other see

Thank you for the feedback! I'll take this into consideration. Thank you for helping me improve the map!

 

[deepstrasz]

No improvements. Rather, a super simple edit.
Substandard.

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