The mansion

[LovG]

I like the story, the enviroment but in some cruciant momments the camara just focus on walls.

 

[Armelior_is_back]

I suppose you watched it with a newer patch in 16:9 ? It was made for 4:3 originally so some framing problems are to be expected. When exactly are the problems ?

 

[LovG]

I suppose you watched it with a newer patch in 16:9 ? It was made for 4:3 originally so some framing problems are to be expected. When exactly are the problems ?

Oh, uhm, yeah. I watched it with last patch, I forgot you mentioned this could happen lol. Well, there are many parts and I didn't count them, sorry. But nevertheless I enjoyed it.

 

[deepstrasz]

A lovely one.
Some issues would be doodads appearing out of the blue because of the camera being too close to them at first especially in the beginning (trees and stuff). There are many parts where the music would work better for action rather than tension or mystery; also some parts where it suddenly stops.
Funny how Tony scratched his back with the torch

Approved.

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[Blasterixx]

Lovely cinematic, my favorite part was the statue coming alive and moving its head fore sure, it looked amazing, it's always nice to see what people can create using the War3 World Editor!

I played the cinematic using War3 version 1.26 and i didn't see any bugs.

I found this scene kinda funny, "Probably just the wind" he says as there are clearly some mysterious burning footprints right in front of him
I guess Tony doesn't have the best eyesight

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[Armelior_is_back]

Yeah every teenager being very dumb is kinda the point, or maybe he was working as a sentinel in the village militia, you know how those cone of visions are limited...