The Crucible (Kul'Tiras Race)

[CerberusSoul]

You have to admit that the map you made is very bad because it has several reasons.....
reason(1) why you don't add more hero for example jaina formal or.....
reason(2) why two of building doesn't have any pathing map and why they are too big....
reason(3) you should add more troops for example admiral elite guard or other kul'tiras model in the web....
reason(4) your map doesn't have any green or red creep camp
reason(5) and why have only one tower....
and some other reasons........

 

[Deleted member 247165]

You have to admit that the map you made is very bad because it has several reasons.....
reason(1) why you don't add more hero for example jaina formal or.....
reason(2) why two of building doesn't have any pathing map and why they are too big....
reason(3) you should add more troops for example admiral elite guard or other kul'tiras model in the web....
reason(4) your map doesn't have any green or red creep camp
reason(5) and why have only one tower....
and some other reasons........

Hello! I believe you can provide feedback to the author without "very bad" and other stuff like that. Instead of blaming what was done "so bad", you can suggest actual improvements for his work.

Also, please do not double post, use the edit button instead.

 

[deepstrasz]

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.
This helps you with the models, skins and icons from Hiveworkshop: Resources in use by The Crucible (Kul'Tiras Race)

Also, by previewing the triggers with the site's feature, I presume this is just a reskin rather than an actual custom race with triggered custom stuff.

Awaiting Update.

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[deepstrasz]

Definitely Lacking, inadequate description, no credits list, no updates...