Rinascita: The Evil Undead

[SalvatorThenorium]

Can you send some screenshots or attach them in the description?

 

[Superfrycook]

Can you send some screenshots or attach them in the description?

Noted.

 

[Cristian]

Spoiler: Spoiler

It was nice! Cant wait for the full campagin
After completing the side mission and getting the item - does the exclamation mark still appear?

 

[Superfrycook]

Spoiler: Spoiler

It was nice! Cant wait for the full campagin
After completing the side mission and getting the item - does the exclamation mark still appear? View attachment 541413

Oops, need to update on the 2nd mission.

 

[user 2710]

total bad campaign

 

[Superfrycook]

total bad campaign

The campaign file size is too big, there are more missions to be released.

 

[Lord_Of_Outland]

The campaign is good, but the dark charge ability ruins everything. Is there any way to fix it?
Hero just charge to the end of the map and just disappeared.

 

[Superfrycook]

The campaign is good, but the dark charge ability ruins everything. Is there any way to fix it?
Hero just charge to the end of the map and just disappeared.

Like I said before, within the casting range of less than 700 or when no enemies around, use the Dark Charge as it means for escape.

 

[Lord_Of_Outland]

Sorry i thought this is for offense ability. But maybe change it to something more suitable like death coil? I understand this is custom ability but it causes a bugs.

 

[Nicks]

total bad campaign

Explain why? I would like to know

 

[Cristian]

I saw you updated the bundle and I thought you added more missions

 

[Superfrycook]

I saw you updated the bundle and I thought you added more missions

Yeah, need to update but this time, the dialogue. So I don’t need to rush and more to come.

 

[Cristian]

Wait.. I thought all the missions would be in just one campaign, all the acts will each have their own campaign?
I'll play the Act 2 later

Edit -

Spoiler: Act 2

I mean... I don't have heroes

 

[Superfrycook]

Wait.. I thought all the missions would be in just one campaign, all the acts will each have their own campaign?
I'll play the Act 2 later

Edit -

Spoiler: Act 2

I mean... I don't have heroesView attachment 543887

You have to complete act one first.

 

[deepstrasz]

Act 1
Intro is too fast paced, the story barely being there or making any impact. Filled with one liners.
Chapter 1 - terrain is quite bare and flat. The side quest is actually a/part of the main quest.
The interlude is so short it becomes meaningless on its own and could be part of a chapter.
Not sue why the player owned circle of power is needed for or if it makes sense, in each playable map.
Workers stop working as they do in cinematic scenes after the latter end.
Got a random crash attacking the orange base in Act 2's mission where the transaction is being made after bringing the wagon to the base.

For what each act offers, the gigantic sizes aren't justified.

Generally, terrain is in dire need of improvement, gameplay diversity is something you definitely need to consider as well as story pacing and engagement as well as character development and uniqueness/differentiation. Not including the techtree and gameplay mechanics. You could worry about those later once you have a better foundation.
It could have potential but for now it has much of little.
You've got the gist of it but should study other, good campaigns to get inspiration and understand the dos and don'ts. One thing's for sure, it takes time and mustn't rush like now.

Simple.

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[Superfrycook]

Act 1
Intro is too fast paced, the story barely being there or making any impact. Filled with one liners.
Chapter 1 - terrain is quite bare and flat. The side quest is actually a/part of the main quest.
The interlude is so short it becomes meaningless on its own and could be part of a chapter.
Not sue why the player owned circle of power is needed for or if it makes sense, in each playable map.
Workers stop working as they do in cinematic scenes after the latter end.
Got a random crash attacking the orange base in Act 2's mission where the transaction is being made after bringing the wagon to the base.

For what each act offers, the gigantic sizes aren't justified.

Generally, terrain is in dire need of improvement, gameplay diversity is something you definitely need to consider as well as story pacing and engagement as well as character development and uniqueness/differentiation. Not including the techtree and gameplay mechanics. You could worry about those later once you have a better foundation.
It could have potential but for now it has much of little.
You've got the gist of it but should study other, good campaigns to get inspiration and understand the dos and don'ts. One thing's for sure, it takes time and mustn't rush like now.

Simple.

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How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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Acts three and four are not yet done, so I’ll keep update it.

Act 1
Intro is too fast paced, the story barely being there or making any impact. Filled with one liners.
Chapter 1 - terrain is quite bare and flat. The side quest is actually a/part of the main quest.
The interlude is so short it becomes meaningless on its own and could be part of a chapter.
Not sue why the player owned circle of power is needed for or if it makes sense, in each playable map.
Workers stop working as they do in cinematic scenes after the latter end.
Got a random crash attacking the orange base in Act 2's mission where the transaction is being made after bringing the wagon to the base.

For what each act offers, the gigantic sizes aren't justified.

Generally, terrain is in dire need of improvement, gameplay diversity is something you definitely need to consider as well as story pacing and engagement as well as character development and uniqueness/differentiation. Not including the techtree and gameplay mechanics. You could worry about those later once you have a better foundation.
It could have potential but for now it has much of little.
You've got the gist of it but should study other, good campaigns to get inspiration and understand the dos and don'ts. One thing's for sure, it takes time and mustn't rush like now.

Simple.

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MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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And of course, villages, towns, and cities are always on flat terrain. But mountains, open ground and unbuildable paths should be raised.

 

[creepkillerxx]

sooooo i just started the campaign, and now my whole army that was resting in the graveyard (cos blighted ground) is locked in it after my hero went ahead to submit the quest... that is kind of a weird trigger...

 

[creepkillerxx]

now in act 2, the mission where i had to defend for 30mins. of course thats too long to just sit around do nothing against easy enemy waves and only one entrance into my base, so i thought strike out. but game keeps crashing regardless of which base i attack, even after restarting.

So now i am literally just gonna stare at screen for 15mins doing absolutely nothing.

Oh and one of the enemy bases cant send creeps cos the only entrance is blocked by dedicated "defenders"

EDIT: ok i gave up, act 2 is unplayable. I think its to do with killing peasant-turned militias and some other buildings. It crashes on the khanless mission as well when i assault the base to my left.