Marine Fort Chaos v2.5

[deepstrasz]

The system says there are some many names you did not credit
Resources in Use by Marine Fort Chaos v2.5 | HIVE

 

[opiemonster]

The system says there are some many names you did not credit
Resources in Use by Marine Fort Chaos v2.5 | HIVE

oh cool how did you do that? ive updated what i think is being used from that list

 

[deepstrasz]

oh cool how did you do that?

Spoiler

ive updated what i think is being used from that list

Thanks.

 

[deepstrasz]

The map concept is practically similar to
Space Orcs vs. Zombies 1.8X

Spoiler: comments

1. Warcraft III spells.
2. Mostly regular items.
3. Gameplay is pretty static. Stay inside the fort and don't die.
4. Coffee shop/building has a small/invisible selection circle.
5. Vlad Zbot model has hero glow even though it's a regular unit.
6. Because many enemy units crowd under the same player, they will start staggering instead of properly moving/attacking.
7. The sandbags have no death/decay animations. You should trigger remove them on death.
8. Spell learn tooltips are the same as the first level (example: Starfall).
9. On level 14 the Medic cannot use the 3rd Starfall level due to less max mana.
10. Attribute Bonus says Nivel instead of Level in brackets written in yellow.
11. The above ability also says it has 5 levels in the learn ability menu.
12. To upgrade UK1 you need semi-expert repairman. If that means training one of the repair peasants, then it's 10 food taken and only two UK1 to train.
    
13. Not sure if intended but after the elevators malfunction you can "repair" them by hitting the nearest levers.
14. Shops should not look like barricades and crates that are also around the map/fort. It's confusing.
    
15. Things like Crown of Kings or Deathlord's Shield are out of context.
16. Insidious Repairman's tower/building has no tooltip. It can be placed anywhere, over anything.
    
17. The Insidious Repairman needs the other repairman so you could use those other features... Maybe it's shared between players?
    
18. Can't see the progress bar of the upgrades on the repairman.
19. Bloody Good Repairman has Build but can't build anything. Same with the genius one.

Generally, it's an OK map but would do better being polished and with less Warcraft III stuff and more custom systems and whatnot.

Approved.

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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

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GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[opiemonster]

The map concept is practically similar to
Space Orcs vs. Zombies 1.8X

Spoiler: comments

1. Warcraft III spells.
2. Mostly regular items.
3. Gameplay is pretty static. Stay inside the fort and don't die.
4. Coffee shop/building has a small/invisible selection circle.
5. Vlad Zbot model has hero glow even though it's a regular unit.
6. Because many enemy units crowd under the same player, they will start staggering instead of properly moving/attacking.
7. The sandbags have no death/decay animations. You should trigger remove them on death.
8. Spell learn tooltips are the same as the first level (example: Starfall).
9. On level 14 the Medic cannot use the 3rd Starfall level due to less max mana.
10. Attribute Bonus says Nivel instead of Level in brackets written in yellow.
11. The above ability also says it has 5 levels in the learn ability menu.
12. To upgrade UK1 you need semi-expert repairman. If that means training one of the repair peasants, then it's 10 food taken and only two UK1 to train.
    
13. Not sure if intended but after the elevators malfunction you can "repair" them by hitting the nearest levers.
14. Shops should not look like barricades and crates that are also around the map/fort. It's confusing.
    
15. Things like Crown of Kings or Deathlord's Shield are out of context.
16. Insidious Repairman's tower/building has no tooltip. It can be placed anywhere, over anything.
    
17. The Insidious Repairman needs the other repairman so you could use those other features... Maybe it's shared between players?
    
18. Can't see the progress bar of the upgrades on the repairman.
19. Bloody Good Repairman has Build but can't build anything. Same with the genius one.

Generally, it's an OK map but would do better being polished and with less Warcraft III stuff and more custom systems and whatnot.

Approved.

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BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
Shar Dundred
Paillan
eubz
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

Thanks for the review ^_^