Disordered Timeline v1.5.0 ENv1.0

[deepstrasz]

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.
This helps you with the models, skins and icons from Hiveworkshop: Resources in use by Disordered Timeline v1.5.0 ENv1.0
You can also upload your map here to generate a list: Asset scanner

The image isn't really helpful since it's in Chinese and there's some unknown profiles there. Can you prove that you actually have permission to upload it here?

Awaiting Update.

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R U L E S

Site Rules
Map Submission Rules

M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

Details

BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

 

[NedurFrog]

A credits list in the map description with the names of the authors whose resources you've used is mandatory. That includes models, skins, icons, custom spells, systems. Also, sounds, music and everything outside this site.
This helps you with the models, skins and icons from Hiveworkshop: Resources in use by Disordered Timeline v1.5.0 ENv1.0
You can also upload your map here to generate a list: Asset scanner

The image isn't really helpful since it's in Chinese and there's some unknown profiles there. Can you prove that you actually have permission to upload it here?

Awaiting Update.

---

If you want more reviews, you should participate in the The Grand Review Exchange!

R U L E S

Site Rules
Map Submission Rules

M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

Details

BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you're not satisfied with the review and wish another opinion, contact the other reviewers or use the staff contact:
https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

Credits2 added to list all resources used from this website.
I kept the Credits as Chinese to make finding author easier without translating their username. The Credits came from the map author but since China user usually shares resources between their own group it'd be really difficult to find the models on public website.

here's the translation for the process of asking for authorization including original text :

我是看到Epicwar有圖之後才抓下來翻譯的，雖然逛B站看到很多有興趣的圖，但台灣辦QQ卡得要死弄了半天還是辦不動，所以現在只能逛周邊還會放圖的中國網站如果想談一些翻譯的注意事項那可以考慮加我的Steam : Censored 單純英文化後分享，不會營利也不會對此圖特殊會員的部分做任何調整或解密

Me : I saw this map appeared at Epicwar.com and decided to translate it, although I found a lot interesting maps on Bilibili, but I struggled to register QQ in order to get access to the maps, so I can only check other China website to find maps. If you want to discuss about what I should aware of while translating, you can add my Steam Censored.
I will only translate it into English and then share, won't be used for commercial purpose nor adjusting anything inside the map.

那我可没时间管这个，我的意思是说你要是想翻译严谨些来表达出一些地图内我要表达出的neta的原作，可以来问我的意思，社畜想办法搞钱已经没时间用爱发电了，哥们翻译我这种时代久远的傻X地图有心了哈

Xuanyuan Yifeng : I might be too busy for this. I mean if you want to get more precise translation for any reference i put in the map you can come to ask me, I'm busy with the job that I don't have time to work on the map anymore, very passionate of you to translate this old map.

就是我不太在乎翻译质量问题，也没有什么翻译上的注意事项，哥们你自己去斟酌，你要是有这方面的追求就问我的意思

Xuanyuan Yifeng : I don't mind the translation quality issue nor has something worth noting if you want to translate, consider the process yourself but if you got any questions you can ask me.

感謝授權，二次元坑的捏他我大致上還是能Get到，其他較含糊的梗可能會找其他譯名替代就不打擾了讓0魔獸經驗的外國朋友體驗過，他們都一下就玩上癮了，非常新人友善的一張RPG圖!

Me : Thanks for the authorization! I can still understand most anime reference on this map, but if there's any reference that are harder to understand I'll try to find other name to replace. sorry for bothering, I made my friend with 0 warcraft experience played it and they really enjoy it. Such a beginner friendly RPG map!

Here's a image to prove that I contacted the author with my Bilibili account

 

[deepstrasz]

That's good and all but it's only about translating, not permission to upload somewhere like on HIVE.
Also, please make a credits list in the map thread description as well like the rules require.

 

[NedurFrog]

That's good and all but it's only about translating, not permission to upload somewhere like on HIVE.
Also, please make a credits list in the map thread description as well like the rules require.

Credits have been updated onto the map description and I contacted the author again, He's now aware of the fact I posted it onto Hiveworkshop specifically.

再次打擾，翻譯成英文版的圖能發佈在Hiveworkshop.com等公開平台嗎目前其實已經發文了，但網站管理員想確認我有發佈此圖的授權如果此行為不妥的話我會再撤下 /)

Me : pardon again, may I post the translated version of your map onto public platform like Hiveworkshop.com? I actually posted it already and the mod wants to confirm I'm authorized to post it. If such behaviour isn't apporpriate let me know and I'll remove it.

额，还是那句话，只要不涉及商业行为怎么发布都行，当然发布之后跟我说一声是更好方便我吃个瓜

Xuanyuan Yifeng : It's alright as long as it doesn't involve commercial purpose, certainly it is better for you to notify me after posting so I can check the respond better.

哦，我看了一下原贴，原贴那个人是说你找我要到了翻译授权但是没有要到转载到hive这个网站的授权是吧

Xuanyuan Yifeng : Oh, I saw the original post. So the mod says you got translation authorization from me but not the authroization to post it onto hive, right?

反正我同意，不过他们估摸着也没看懂，This Chinese mean,I agree this map to upload on Hive.语法不知道有没有错，意思到就行。

Xuanyuan Yifeng : Nonetheless I'll agree, but they might not understand the chinese. This Chinese mean,I agree this map to upload on Hive.语法不知道有没有错，意思到就行。

I hope this Warcraft map brings some fun to all the bros

了解，感謝大大，那我就更新內容了

Me : Alright, thank you sir, I'll update the content right away.