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- The Almirant (should be Admiral in English) is already available in the Tavern before the other heroes can be bought or the ones in the altars summoned.
- There's some text error with the yellow text parts on Almirant.
- The Almirant's icon is that of the Paladin. It should be that of Daelin Proudmoore.
- The third spell is called Black Arrow and has the original's description.
- I think the workers should build the shipyard, otherwise you could create them with your hero whenever you want.
- You can't know how many ships you can build unless you count the additions from the spell.
- The hero's spells are nothing special, mostly renamed Warcraft III ones. Naval Army is the most custom one but isn't really fit for a hero spell but more for an upgrade.
- Naval Army has the Thorns Aura buff and should look passive. You could make the icon look like that with: Button Manager v1.8.2
- Scout and Naval Army spells do not have levels in their descriptions. Learn about tooltips:
- Tooltip Tutorial
Creating Good Descriptions
Well, I'm Mialee from Brazil and you're about to read a tutorial about how to create good heroes to your map. Do not expect a 100% correct grammar since my country doesn't speak english. ------------------------------------------ 1. Introduction 2. Making a good hero description 3...
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So, right now, the concept is too simple and should be more versed.
Awaiting Update.
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