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Is the map yours or you just translated it?
Treat. How much gold does it spend? Is it dependable on hit points?
After you get out of an object you lose the CTRL+1 (unit group).
Beer says the opponent is intoxicated in wine. Anyways, what does it exactly do? You should mention that.
Improve protection. How much, what exactly? You should write all these details in descriptions.
What's xn? Cheese increases HP.
Not sure if intended or not but you can move the magic barrier surrounding the golem with Move Furniture.
What do the orc's spells do exactly? Also, try avoiding rape and cadavers... (note this is mostly a kid's site and the context is improper). Also, this later ability's icon doesn't look like it can be autocast. You can turn it into that. Check links below.
Tooltip Tutorial
Creating Good Descriptions
Improve HP doesn't look like disabled when you're far from the shop. Be sure to put the right DISBTN icon for it:
Button Manager v1.8.2
BLP Lab v0.5.0
Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
How to Make an Icon
Not sure about balance but the orc having invisibility for 120 seconds is pretty win against fewer magicians.
Another problem might be that the orc also becomes stronger even if he has the biggest advantage at the start. I mean, he can find the same items, healing, mana restoration etc.
Visibility isn't cut by the walls and doors. You can see the enemy nearby through the walls. I think making the map all night or trying to use visibility blockers would be better.
Awaiting Update.
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Is the map yours or you just translated it?
Treat. How much gold does it spend? Is it dependable on hit points?
After you get out of an object you lose the CTRL+1 (unit group).
Beer says the opponent is intoxicated in wine. Anyways, what does it exactly do? You should mention that.
Improve protection. How much, what exactly? You should write all these details in descriptions.
What's xn? Cheese increases HP.
Not sure if intended or not but you can move the magic barrier surrounding the golem with Move Furniture.
What do the orc's spells do exactly? Also, try avoiding rape and cadavers... (note this is mostly a kid's site and the context is improper). Also, this later ability's icon doesn't look like it can be autocast. You can turn it into that. Check links below.
Tooltip Tutorial
Creating Good Descriptions
Improve HP doesn't look like disabled when you're far from the shop. Be sure to put the right DISBTN icon for it:
Button Manager v1.8.2
BLP Lab v0.5.0
Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
How to Make an Icon
Not sure about balance but the orc having invisibility for 120 seconds is pretty win against fewer magicians.
Another problem might be that the orc also becomes stronger even if he has the biggest advantage at the start. I mean, he can find the same items, healing, mana restoration etc.
Visibility isn't cut by the walls and doors. You can see the enemy nearby through the walls. I think making the map all night or trying to use visibility blockers would be better.
Awaiting Update.
If you want more reviews, you should participate in the The Grand Review Exchange!
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