The Black Morass

[Mint Blancmanche]

someone is going to bitch at you for:
1-too much grass (not enought different tiles)
2-terrain is too plain (needs to be bumpy as shit)
3-not enough doodads (you have to put a bunch of shit to make it look more alive)
can't speak about creep camps, neutral buildings and items, have not downloaded the map xD

 

[Blackrockfan]

someone is going to bitch at you for:
1-too much grass (not enought different tiles)
2-terrain is too plain (needs to be bumpy as shit)
3-not enough doodads (you have to put a bunch of shit to make it look more alive)
can't speak about creep camps, neutral buildings and items, have not downloaded the map xD

Thank you for the feed back! I will add a bit more tiles and bump up the land in the next version!

 

[deepstrasz]

Nice start. However, quite minimal and melee breaking. Please read the melee guides below.
Also check how a proper melee map description should look like. You'd also want to name your file something like (2)The Black Morass.

Simple.

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