My second terrain - Morass

[Parkietje]

Morass

Ok, my second terrain yet. This time I made a realistic terrain(or at least tried to).

Ok, I tried to improve it

 

[DungeonM]

I like it, very simple but composed well and has a really nice atmosphere, the cave/fade into black is the best part.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Looks nice.You should have added a fog and something to focus in most.I mean,make a cave in the background.

 

[~Void~]

I don't really like the atmosphere. I don't think it lacks atmosphere, but it could definitely use some dark greenish fog and some light poking through the trees.

 

[FireMaster]

I like it, but it will be a playable map?

 

[Gilles]

You need to make the transition into the black better. Not exactly sure how, maybe use the light doodad. Or the glow doodad.

 

[Belgarath]

Maybe you shouldn't downsize it so much. I'd add a fog and a bend around somewhere, then fade into black - unless that's your fog.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Actually you should have used some fog to make it more realistic.It looks a bit odd.

 

[Nudl9]

Stop using poll as for getting critism + dont use "second terrain" for an excuse to get sympathy (its very lame!).

 

[Parkietje]

Stop using poll as for getting critism + dont use "second terrain" for an excuse to get sympathy (its very lame!).

Well, sorry for the thread name then. As I didn't named it that way to get sympathy...

I like it, but it will be a playable map?

Yes, you could use it as a playable map

 

[~Void~]

Stop using poll as for getting critism + dont use "second terrain" for an excuse to get sympathy (its very lame!).

Poll is fine. If he wants to know what people think of this so he can improve it, that's fine and actually better than just saying "LOL HERES MY 2ND TERRANZ".

 

[DungeonM]

Stop using poll as for getting critism + dont use "second terrain" for an excuse to get sympathy (its very lame!).

And now I know why Drysc went insane.

 

[Volvox]

I say the atmosphere is poor, your lighting just isn't right...

 

[Parkietje]

Ok, I tried to improve it. it's in the first post

 

[Belgarath]

That's quite nice. Don't downsize it though.

 

[Hawkwing]

The green fog is no good. He meant fog not the type of weather "fog".

The trees, terrain, and other doodads look great. But a boat in the water? Take away the units.