Hidden garden

[Championfighter25]

Some neutral hostile creeps don't start with full mana.
The bottom 2 goldmines have a bit more trees than those on the top side.
Other than that I think this is a nice map.
5/5 from me.

 

[mafe]

Some neutral hostile creeps don't start with full mana.

Which is good. Most competitive melee maps do the same.
More feedback in a few minutes..... Oh the map is protected? Sorry then not

 

[Daffa]

I don't see any reason why normal melee is protected to be honest. If you're afraid of having the terrain getting stolen, I'm sure there are lots of ways to get the data regardless of protection.

 

[Cenbes]

Which is good. Most competitive melee maps do the same.
More feedback in a few minutes..... Oh the map is protected? Sorry then not

I don't see any reason why normal melee is protected to be honest. If you're afraid of having the terrain getting stolen, I'm sure there are lots of ways to get the data regardless of protection.

lol what is protected, why these things even happening ?
i need to found how to get it to normal

also i checked evry syngle camp in editor and all creeps have full mana in it

im working on it in my editor, how did this can get even protected ?! and also keep doing mana bug ?!

 

[deepstrasz]

Which is good. Most competitive melee maps do the same.

Why is it good? Doesn't your hero start with full mana?

 

[deepstrasz]

There's not quite enough space to build (main base especially).
Paths/roads are narrow.
Many choke points where you could build towers and block the way. Use unbuildable terrain in those places.
I don't think those ogres are enough for two mines unless the gold is halved.

Awaiting Update.

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