Exodium RPG v1.90E

[Deleted member 247165]

Here we go again. You are the one that tried to get those RPG maps approved by making multiple accounts and reuploading them on different bundles. It's not ok to break the rules.... Also, description is lacking, check this out: Map Description - Templates And also! Credits list is not only you in it, look at this again: https://www.hiveworkshop.com/resources/exodium-rpg-v1-85e.79883/resources-in-use

 

[baesulnam]

I have revised

 

[deepstrasz]

You have to credit the authors as well as any company of games or material you've taken resources from. The credits list has to be in the map description.
This will help with the resources from HiveWorkshop: Resources in Use by Exodium RPG v1.85E | HIVE

Awaiting Update.

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• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
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[baesulnam]

check plz

 

[Deleted member 247165]

check plz

Fix what deepstrasz mentioned. Listen to what the map reviewer advised you.

 

[deepstrasz]

Are you sure you've credited all models and resources (sound/music etc.)? I'm also referring to those which are not from HiveW.
You should not mix melee type of loading screen with that of custom games/campaigns. I recommend using the latter.

1. Many icons have no DISBTNs. They look like green squares on F10/pause. Learn about importing icons properly:
2. Button Manager v1.8.2
BLP Lab v0.5.0
Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
How to Make an Icon
3. Abilities need proper descriptions. Now, it's some 1-2 words or letters with some numbers:
Tooltip Tutorial
Creating Good Descriptions
4. Terrain is pretty lackluster and there is much blank space.
5. The orc unit near the human trainer has no name.
6. Pulverize is a passive ability with an active icon. You could make it look passive with this: Button Manager v1.8.2
7. Use the other Play Music trigger to avoid playing it as sound.
8. The gameplay is repetitive. You pretty much kill units on the map. There is no imminent danger. You choose whom to fight and when.
9. Pet item descriptions don't say what they do.
10. Used Behaviour on the Knight near the Tauren Chieftain and then killed all creatures and the forgotten one in the zone I was moved to but then I coulnd't get out anymore...
I had to use the -recall command.
11. Using Behaviour on some units will make text like : P: 5 3 appear....

Awaiting Update.

 

[baesulnam]

Thank you for your review. I'll fix it quickly.

 

[Veldris]

Good map.good unique heros nice Effects

Rating: 9/10

 

[deepstrasz]

Write a proper changelog. Did you fix what I've mentioned? Thank you.

Awaiting Update.

 

[baesulnam]

I have a question. Do I have to do all the items(1-11)? Do I have to make a partial entry?

Are you sure you've credited all models and resources (sound/music etc.)? I'm also referring to those which are not from HiveW.
You should not mix melee type of loading screen with that of custom games/campaigns. I recommend using the latter. <-- modify is easy but, Items 1-11 are also related to the nature of the game. For example, green icons protect my item's personal information from others.

 

[deepstrasz]

For example, green icons protect my item's personal information from others.

I don't understand how that is. What exactly do you mean?

Just fix as many green icons as you can. Write proper descriptions for items (pets included) and spells. Fix behaviour on units: the text/conversation/info that appears.

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EDIT:
Awaiting Update until issues fixed and mentioned that they were addressed.