Dungeon

[Zucth]

nice to see new melee mapper appearing. There are a few things that you need to fix. Just an overview though, Hive map reviewer has to do this again anyway.

1. trees gap, it's the biggest problem here. we need to close all the gap due to the difference between each unit collision.
2. there are no way that the path between red/teal is big enough to walk over.
3. some creep that should be on creep stance and it's not. Talk about green camps in front & next to of the base.
4. not enough space & trees for expo.
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+notice note, it's kinda important: place a lot of path blocker in one place could cause fps issues.

 

[FrFrancuz]

nice to see new melee mapper appearing. There are a few things that you need to fix. Just an overview though, Hive map reviewer has to do this again anyway.

1. trees gap, it's the biggest problem here. we need to close all the gap due to the difference between each unit collision.
2. there are no way that the path between red/teal is big enough to walk over.
3. some creep that should be on creep stance and it's not. Talk about green camps in front & next to of the base.
4. not enough space & trees for expo.
.
+notice note, it's kinda important: place a lot of path blocker in one place could cause fps issues.

hi, how long does it take to check a card?

 

[deepstrasz]

Please rename the file and map thread title accordingly adding the player number at the front: (4)Dungeon.

Pretty standard looking. Could make it less flat, barren and nicer overall. Tried it in Reforged and some places seem like you could go through but the darkness doesn't reveal as it's a cliff. Some places are tad hard to make out properly what they actually are until you hit them as the wall they are.
Many camps too near each other create creeping exploits. One could build some towers near the camps beforehand or just use AoE spells and return when the camps are lower health and so on.
The middle mine although guarded from both sides, will be exposed from one side as a haunted one, the other factions, not being so vulnerable as the undead.

Simple.

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