Divided Village

[Zucth]

Look more like a melee map made for campaign map than a casual melee map.
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Some of the basic has been execute well for a beginner.
1. Item drop look acceptable.
2. Good map size selection. Not perfect but it's not bad!
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Some that need to fix to make it fit for the casual melee case.
1. Trees gaps in playable area must be fixed.
1.1 Doodad gaps are extra detail if you could carry it.
2. Creeps aggro should be set to camp mode, unless it's the goldmines camp.
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Extra review note:
Bad synergy/flow layout. Path and creep camp position doesn't lead to anywhere, I only see visual appeal in this case.
Good luck!

 

[Grey Gnoll]

Look more like a melee map made for campaign map than a casual melee map.
.
Some of the basic has been execute well for a beginner.
1. Item drop look acceptable.
2. Good map size selection. Not perfect but it's not bad!
.
Some that need to fix to make it fit for the casual melee case.
1. Trees gaps in playable area must be fixed.
1.1 Doodad gaps are extra detail if you could carry it.
2. Creeps aggro should be set to camp mode, unless it's the goldmines camp.
.
Extra review note:
Bad synergy/flow layout. Path and creep camp position doesn't lead to anywhere, I only see visual appeal in this case.
Good luck!

Thank you for providing feedback on my map
I have started to fix the gaps in the trees and doodads and will try and connect the different creep camps that stop at dead ends, to try and improve the flow of creeping

 

[deepstrasz]

Tree gaps still present.
Terrain is quite flat.
Creep camps should have low camping range (double click on them) if not protecting mines.
Would be good not to have buildable tiles near bridges if there aren't enough routes to your enemy to avoid lame gameplay with towers and stuff.
Bridges need to be properly placed. Use CTRL+PAGE UP/PAGE DOWN to lower or raise them.
Some paths are quite narrow.

Overall a nice idea but not quite melee ready.
Simple.

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