(2)Granite Arch v1.1

[btp|Lancer]

Great job here Zucth, as always. Love the ashenvale trees with these layouts in corners, variety of creeps. Love the combo.
Something to consider (maybe adding in the description could be useful).

• Low gold on expansions.
• The free nearby expansion has very low lumber around.. As you mentioned is also very wide open. Pretty impossible to defend or wall off.
• Healing wave on Lab's creep is pretty hardcore. I might have creeped bad. It took me a lot of time.
• The targeatable door next to the shop is a bit annoying. Health bar is huge, but health points are low. Did you do this on purpose? I targeted the door instead of the enemy units by mistake.
• Creeps in shop are actually set behind the shop, not in front of. Also on purpose?

 

[deepstrasz]

Approved based on @btp|Lancer's review.

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