(2)Clinfvs v1.1

[OnyxTheDark]

Hello there

You need to fix the holes behind trees on the first expand, both sides
And put some pathing blockers on the mountain, just in case some tricky maeiv would blink in there

Could also add some Grassy Dirt to mix with the Dark Grass and render it smoother, the tiles transitions aren't really worked on
Same for the rocks, too much rocks not enough side doodads

And you need to fill up pathing blockers around sanctuaries too

On the good side, creep camps are well balanced imo and item drops fit according to it
Nicely done there

 

[Panda]

Very interesting map layout

 

[deepstrasz]

Too easy to rush due to small distance between start locations and/or direct/straight path in between.
The map borders look ugly like triangles because of the oblique design. They could be hidden by not being able to directly move near them.

Approved.

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