(2)Reipjaw v1.1

[deepstrasz]

A green camp dropping (Deceiver) a belt of strength +3 and slippers of agility +3 at once is tad too much I'd say.
Building space is very tight especially in starting positions which is bad as corridors/paths are also narrow.
Terrain looks neat; I'd suggest not spamming the same doodad too much, especially near each other (obelisks and columns looking at you).
A tent that looks like a human shipyard? Why not a shipyard without any ships instead?
Why a Mur'gul slave as neutral passive? Couldn't it potentially be possessed (Banshee) or converted (Dark Ranger Charm) and used to build naga stuff?

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[Zucth]

A green camp dropping (Deceiver) a belt of strength +3 and slippers of agility +3 at once is tad too much I'd say.
Building space is very tight especially in starting positions which is bad as corridors/paths are also narrow.
Terrain looks neat; I'd suggest not spamming the same doodad too much, especially near each other (obelisks and columns looking at you).
A tent that looks like a human shipyard? Why not a shipyard without any ships instead?
Why a Mur'gul slave as neutral passive? Couldn't it potentially be possessed (Banshee) or converted (Dark Ranger Charm) and used to build naga stuff?

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The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
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Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

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WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

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How to create Melee Maps
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Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
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reskin is a trick. There was some case before where if you use campaign stuff. orc can pillage it. I just avoid it entirely. shipyard without any ship will leave yellow icon on the minimap. Avoided confuse or mis-info entirely. I don't have deep knowledge in like which building is and which building is not. I just avoid it. There were some case where people expect something from the visual of the building. Not in this case, most people didn't even know about human shipyard, that you could brough from it.
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I don't think they can charm or posses passive neutral unit from what I know. I could be wrong as well.
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I made x2 p1 item there, maybe it was because it out of the way where people usually goes. it's out of the way, or like it's the place where flow got cut. So extra reward, same thought as creep behind inaccessible trees or creep on island has extra reward.