:/ i am extremely disappointing in everyone. Hell, ill admit that i dont make music myself, and i "cant possibly imagine how hard it is" but all the same. I am very displeased. ALL IM HEARING IS TECHNO!! I would understand if i were in a nightclub or something, but i for one would never play a game if i had to listen to the bumchickabumchicka thump, of techno-crap every time i try to complete a mission or level in a video game. ESPECIALLY a video game like WC3. The music has to fit the story, the lore, the characters. People often think of video games and movies as moving pictures with dialogue, but without music, there would be no feeling, no emotion.
If you actually LISTEN to the ingame music... NONE of it is techno, no synthesized-sounding notes. No electric keyboard or distorted notes. With the exception of "BishopofDoom's" entry, everything here is very disappointing. Some might be good songs in their own right (at a techno-bar or nightclub) but don't have any business as theme songs for the sort of primitive, magical, medieval, and sometimes bestial races that blizzard has created.
As for BishopofDoom's entry.... i like the violin, but debode was right, the background noises sound terrible, they make me cringe each time i hear the clank of a hammer on an anvil, they are out of sync with the music and much too obtrusive. But when you take away the background noise... you are left with a very simple sounding violin solo. Dont get me wrong, i LOVE the violin, but the violin works better with some backup, violin is like chocolate on deserts, you can add chocolate violin to a lot of deserts and make it better, like cookie bass or milk piano etc. but on its own.. it is just a lump of chocolate violin. Boring.
..... anywho, good luck to the contestants, i cant wait to see more entries...
AND REMEMBER: Dont just try to win this contest.... try to make beautiful music
...Is my song so amazingly boring that you don't even count it as an entry, or is it down with the stuff which is "very disappointing"? If you're going to go on a long, rather insulting rant, I'd suggest you at least address every piece other than BishopofDoom's entry, and why it sucks, individually. There aren't that many. Also, I would like it if you didn't generalize about all the entries. Everything is techno? Okay, I'll admit that lots of the entries so far do have a techno feel to them, but certainly not all of them are techno. I mean, I personally, find that the techno submissions so far are pretty catchy, and, while I'm not really sure if they correspond well to the Warcraft Universe, every piece is open to interpretation. Meanwhile, I on the other hand, have done everything you thought that a contestant in this contest should do. I composed my song with my race (the tauren) in mind, instead of what most people seem to do, which is come up with something, and see which race it most closely fits, but there's NOTHING WRONG WITH THAT. Also, I have, as you said, not been trying not to win this contest, but to make beautiful music, and I, personally, thought I did an okay job. But when I ask for critique, when I specifically ask for comments, because I am torn between two versions of my piece, I first get no reply, and then you come in and say that every piece sucks except one which still needs tons of work. Acceptable? Hardly. Now I don't care if you think my piece is the lamest thing ever written for symphonic orchestra. I don't care if you have no experience with classical style, and can't really comment on the nuances of it. I don't care if you think I should start all over from scratch, just SOMEBODY COMMENT ON MY MUSIC!
Now, in order to set a good example, I will be commenting on whatever entries I can find. I will edit my post, to contain my comments, critiques and current ratings. Even though I don't know much about modern-style music, I still know what sounds right to my ear, and what I think a piece should do. I hope that all of you will follow in my example, and individually critique pieces, instead of just skimming through a few, generalizing about them, and saying that they all suck. Also, anarchianbedlam, I'm really sorry if I seemed pissed off. I have great respect for you, and I don't wish to make you mad. I was just really disappointed after I worked, day and night, for several weeks, to finish my first draft, and then all that happens is that I get completely ignored and shoved down to the bottom of the pile.
Review I: Dan van Ohlllus:
Comments: Pretty good so far. I'm not that fond of that particular style of music, but what you did with it was pretty good. I'm eager to see where you take this. If you could add another layer, have it build up a bit, and then quickly release all the built up energy, leading into a soft quiet bit, which leads back into the main theme, ending on that, I think you'd have a pretty damn good composition. I'm not sure about how it fits with WC3. As you said, I'm not sure which race it goes with, but since you haven't specified one, yet, I'm not gonna really downgrade you on that.
The piece: 61/100
How it fits the race: 50/100
Review II: EMPerror
Comments: I like this. It's fun, energetic, and quite catchy. However, I do find it a bit repetitive, and, because of that, a bit on the long side. If it were a less interesting theme, I would find it utterly boring, but you did a great job coming up with a catchy theme. Also, there isn't much development. Of course, you add layers, and they sound pretty good, but still find that the music doesn't really go far enough from its original starting place as I would like. If possible, maybe you could tone down the intro, build up, and them peter off into a quiet, soft interlude which leads back into a loud, explosive rendition of the main them. I'm not sure how this would work, but I think it might add a lot of depth to your piece. As for theme, I'm not really sure how well it fits water elementals. To me this music sounds fast, speedy, and electric, like surfing through the universe on a beam of light. In terms of theme, I might think of this song when I hear someone talking about water elementals, but I probably would not think of water elementals if I heard this song without knowing what it was about.
The piece: 76/100
Theme: 45/100
Thank you for your attention.