@NightStalker
It is going pretty well, I like how you did the buildup and all. From the middle onwards it lacks something, but I guess you're aware of it since it is a WIP so that shouldn't be a problem. And hey, what was your theme exactly? "Not to be overwhelmed" was such an intriguing title and I was left wondering.
@DESTROYER123
As I love classic instruments so I may be suspicios to analyze your piece hehe. So I like the melody you wrote, specially in the climax part near the end. I feel that the rest of the song actually paints the emotion you're aiming for, however I would try to make it be more intense in whichever was the objective of that phrase (e.g. if it was supposed to be sad, make it sadder).
@PrinceYaser
Really nice atmosphere, man! That was a pleasure to listen to. I loved your constant sweet melancholy throughout the piece. Each section has its own melody and it really helps in the feeling that there's a story being told. If I could tell you something it would be to increase the volume, for obvious reasons, and to try to remove the recording noise (some clicked low sound) that appears at 0:11 and somwhere at the end.
@deepstrasz
Ooh that was a really cool choice of instrumets at the introduction (reminds me of Shadow of the Colossus - and this will always be a good thing). The very pleasant beggining contrasts into a series of sections that provides an everchanging atmosphere of desolation and confusion, which fits very well with the theme. I couldn't actually paint the scenery you're trying to provide in my mind, but I was left with a cybergoth feel - but well, I guess that was your intention. Nice job anyways, I liked the intro and the "gloomy" part the most. If I would change something it would be the transition part, but I don't really know what I would do with it
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As for my (kind of) final entry:
I'm going to rework it, I think I is really going the wrong direction (as can be seen in here). So, if I don't upload anything else before the deadline, this is going to be my final entry... I hope not!