Old Burdens v.1.2

[deepstrasz]

1. Rush path is there. Could make the way to the enemy either longer or with some peril for the workers.
2. Fel Peons or any worker as neutral hostile units doesn't make sense damage-wise, unless the plan is to Charm or possess the worker and start building Chaos Orc material.
3. A lot of Chaos Attack Type creep camps which might be inconvenient in the long run.
4. The Orc Warchief while looking nice had its stats only properly modified in the first Human mission of RoC while in the editor remained weak, HP 340 and damage 4-18.
5. Two Boots of Quel'Thalas on the Marketplace camp is a bit overkill.
6. The fountain might compensate for the chaos creeps but could become a focus point orienting the gameplay around it.

Nice concepts but have to be properly tested in the melee scene both for the balance aspect and fun factor.

Approved.

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[TheTurt1e]

1. Rush path is there. Could make the way to the enemy either longer or with some peril for the workers.
2. Fel Peons or any worker as neutral hostile units doesn't make sense damage-wise, unless the plan is to Charm or possess the worker and start building Chaos Orc material.
3. A lot of Chaos Attack Type creep camps which might be inconvenient in the long run.
4. The Orc Warchief while looking nice had its stats only properly modified in the first Human mission of RoC while in the editor remained weak, HP 340 and damage 4-18.
5. Two Boots of Quel'Thalas on the Marketplace camp is a bit overkill.
6. The fountain might compensate for the chaos creeps but could become a focus point orienting the gameplay around it.

Nice concepts but have to be properly tested in the melee scene both for the balance aspect and fun factor.

Approved.

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Thanks for the review and comment, man. I've looked into what I can and need to change.
I think a few things should be better now. I still want the Orc Warchief, he's a little silly.
But anyway, the updated stuff is in the description.

 

[TheTurt1e]

Version 1.2 is out. Changes are in the description and on the screenshots