Ice Crown Legendary battle

[deepstrasz]

You have uploaded two more Ice Crown maps in the past and deleted them:

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/ice-crown.339932/

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/ice-crown.339930/

Please refrain from doing so in the future. The Maps section is not a test field or spam forum.

 

[K.GamingPlays]

You have uploaded two more Ice Crown maps in the past and deleted them:

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/ice-crown.339932/

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/threads/ice-crown.339930/

Please refrain from doing so in the future. The Maps section is not a test field or spam forum.

yeah i know bro i did a mistake 2 times because i posted the wrong ice crown maps and it will.not hapent again

 

[Achille]

Once again this is really only a reskinning of a race, there isn't much actually being changed or added here. There are also a number of incredibly fundamental issues I have gleaned by just glancing at the map:

Both the Coral Bed and the Coral Mill share an Icon and a model. The tidal guardian deals 30+ damage every .6 seconds making it an insanely powerful tower.

The Naga Siren says that it can 'learn' Frost Armor but it starts with it initially with no prior upgrade requirement even thought the unit description implies otherwise.

Troll regeneration isn't even reskinned or recontextualized, its just available in the Spawning Grounds leaving the player guessing as to what units it may benefit.

There are an excessive number of typos from ‘Sea Reveant Grond’ to ‘Blue Dragonspawn Woriors’ prolific through the map.

Finally, having an exact copy of the Demon Hunter as a hero available for the Naga to train in a map that allows for Night Elves to be chosen as a race is a whole different level of scuffed.

Alot of work has to be done for this to be improved in my opinion. It needs some original content, the descriptions need to be delivered from languishing in typos and obscurity, and some real testing should be done on your end to check out some of the changes you've been making. Alot of the mistakes I have been seeing in what is otherwise a very simple reskinning of races could be easily seen from someone playing a single melee match with just one of these races.

If the issues I mentioned are addressed, I will change my rating.

 

[K.GamingPlays]

Once again this is really only a reskinning of a race, there isn't much actually being changed or added here. There are also a number of incredibly fundamental issues I have gleaned by just glancing at the map:

Both the Coral Bed and the Coral Mill share an Icon and a model. The tidal guardian deals 30+ damage every .6 seconds making it an insanely powerful tower.

The Naga Siren says that it can 'learn' Frost Armor but it starts with it initially with no prior upgrade requirement even thought the unit description implies otherwise.

Troll regeneration isn't even reskinned or recontextualized, its just available in the Spawning Grounds leaving the player guessing as to what units it may benefit.

There are an excessive number of typos from ‘Sea Reveant Grond’ to ‘Blue Dragonspawn Woriors’ prolific through the map.

Finally, having an exact copy of the Demon Hunter as a hero available for the Naga to train in a map that allows for Night Elves to be chosen as a race is a whole different level of scuffed.

Alot of work has to be done for this to be improved in my opinion. It needs some original content, the descriptions need to be delivered from languishing in typos and obscurity, and some real testing should be done on your end to check out some of the changes you've been making. Alot of the mistakes I have been seeing in what is otherwise a very simple reskinning of races could be easily seen from someone playing a single melee match with just one of these races.

If the issues I mentioned are addressed, I will change my rating.

bro i know but i dont change the abillities of heroes or skins of units because i whant the al compiuter to also play my costume races if i change the heroes abilitys the al will not use other abillitys

 

[deepstrasz]

The naga has orc upgrades. It's pretty much and edited orc.
Sorry, but this is really shallow work. Feels as if you didn't give it proper time, thought and consideration.

Substandard.

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[K.GamingPlays]

The naga has orc upgrades. It's pretty much and edited orc.
Sorry, but this is really shallow work. Feels as if you didn't give it proper time, thought and consideration.

Substandard.

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i really dont have time
i did some upgrades to the blood elves yesterday but still i dont have much time coz i have to work to earn money . I dont earn money from this work i do here bit tbh i was hoping to find a way to earn really money from my maps if that is possible ?

 

[K.GamingPlays]

can someone tell me a way to earn real money from the downloads because there is no way all the other guys who work really really hard to do costume races or campaigns earn nothing .
i mean come on a guy like tomoradier for example made two of the most downloadet campaigns dint get nothing from hes job.