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ok, well, here's my new race.
Race
Name: Vultaran
Home Planet: Vutaris
Controlled Planets: Vultaris (System: Vran‘kar)
Life Span: about 230 years
Government: Monarchy
Leader: Vrakena Makrar
Description: Picture available
Other/History: They are a race of conquerors and destroyers. They do not care for life and do not keep pets. If given the chance, they will slaughter anyone or anything that they consider an enemy or food. Their race resides on a highly volcanic planet and is the second closest to their sun. Because of this, they have adapted to the extreme heat. To add to this need for heat, their body generates heat up to 200o
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/shock_13.jpg
Character:
Name: Revarana
Race: Vultaran
Occupation: Commander of the Tephra Blade
Description/Appearance: Picture available
Background/Other: Born on the Volcanic planet of Vultaris, Revarana trained in the ways of the warrior and quickly rose the ranks of the Vultaran Military. A few years after starting, Revarana was given the position of commander in the Tephra Blade. He was given the command of the largest fleet his species has ever seen.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/shock_14.jpg

Ships: Nemesis class command ship, Wraith class destroyers, Spirit class cruisers, Neptune class Super Destroyer, Archon class fighter, Phoenix class shuttle, Proximus scout drone
Materials: Krytinium, plasma, centurion
~~~ Nemesis Class Command Ship
Hull: Krytinium, a strong metal that is used on the surface of the Vultaran ships. It allows them to be immune to intense heat, nebula storms, and EMP. It is resistant to Centurion gas, and the hull is polorized to protect from asteroids or other objects.
Power: The ships use plasma to power the various systems.
Shields: The shields are ok in strength, and will absorb some energy. The Vultarans pump out a special energy-like gas called Centurion that allows the shields to reflect energy blasts, like beams and lasers, at a 15o to 45o angle. After battles, they suck back the unused gas. They can use this to gather plasma in nebulas. The Centurion gas also has a side effect, enabling it to corrode metals. This keeps alien races from docking and boarding them. Nobody likes their ships being destroyed by gases. XD
Weapons: laser turrets that fire large blasts of energy. Beam turrets that fire a stream of energy, quickly heating up the hulls of ships to cut through them. Anti fighter beams are small and quick to respond to fighter and bomber threats. Bombs are a higher priority than fighters.
Warp Core: uses the same plasma as the rest of the ship. Can easily be adapted to other types of plasma, if you know how the systems work.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/ragnor10.jpg
~~~ Wraith Destroyer: Krytinium hull, plasma powered systems, Centurion shielding.
Weapons: Beam Turrets and laser cannons (for planetary assault and fleet battles)
Hull: Self repairing Krytinium hull. Ship is made of bioengineered materials that regrow and repair systems. It is at its maximum size and uses its ability to grow for repairs instead.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/fleet_10.jpg
~~~ Spirit Cruiser: Krytinium, plasma powered systems, Centurion shielding
Weapons: laser cannons
Hull: Self repairing Krytinium hull. Ship is made of bioengineered materials that regrows and repairs systems. The hull becomes stronger as the repairing process goes. Every now and then, the ships have to go through a stasis stage where the ship grows an outer shell and makes itself bigger. It eventually becomes a corvette, and then a destroyer, if given enough time and resources.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/spirit10.jpg
~~~ Neptune Corvette: Krytinium hull with plasma coating. Krytinium shell protects ship from being damaged by energy weapons, and any energy hitting it will be spread out and be absorbed by the ship’s energy absorption system (EAB) for later use. The ship has a passive ability where EMP waves that scramble all sensors on all non-Vultaran ships. EMP waves emanate from the ship’s hull. This function is stopped when in warp, but once it’s out of the warp tunnel, its function continues.
Weapons: Primary: Beam weapons
Secondary: Hull: Krytinium hull with plasma coating
The ship also serves as a gas miner. The front of the ship has suction mechanisms that enable the ship to draw in plasma from nebulas. However, the ship also has a mechanism that allows it to destroy any physical materials that also are sucked in (i.e. ships and debris). The area where the gas is drawn into is covered with Krytinium. Any explosive materials that detonate or explode will not rip apart the ship. Bombs will most likely not work, since the Krytinium is very strong.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/neptun10.jpg
~~~ Fighters:
Weapons: Primary: plasma bolts (small lasers that corrode normal metal, i.e. steel. Does not affect Vultaran ships because of the Krytinium)
Secondary: Missiles/alt: bombs
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/archon10.jpg
~~~ Transports: Gold in color, these ships are made of the typical steel with a coating of Krytinium to withstand high temperatures. Not meant for dogfights.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/pheoni10.jpg
~~~ Scout drones: radar dampeners that absorb radar frequencies, making it undetectable. Relatively fast and has special recording technology. Can fly through nebula storms and is used for scouting enemy forces in space or on planets. High range sensors allow it to detect ships in the area. Can be dropped in a system and will send feedback through secure subspace channels.
http://i87.servimg.com/u/f87/13/97/94/42/proxim10.jpg
 
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The Vultarans pump out a special energy-like gas called Centurion that allows the shields to reflect energy blasts, like beams and lasers, at a 15o to 45o angle.
you can't reflect attacks. That's cheap -.- Still, a 50 angle isn't reflecting, but still, my first sentince is implied. Shields can't deflect any attacks to any angle. Any shield can only absorb damage for the ship.
 
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ry guys i havent been on this for awhile, yea i know, but u guys, THE REVIVING POTION COMES FROM TARAK! not bluedust. the vilehand doesnt relly have ships other than stealth fighters and dropships... sry for the sloppiness i just had a brainstorm i didnt want to waste :cry: *runs away to an old hosue and crys in in the corner*

home planet :none, they wander on large dropships like te empire in star wars
They have stealthy, sneaky tech, they can kind of phase out in darkness, etc i guess ill call it shadow tech. they focus on being unseen on the batttle field, but when they are caught, it is hard to get away unless they have some slashers outside, also, ive changed it so slashers have a large machine gun and heavy armor, with a thick helmet.

They have a dictatorship and have 2 controlled planets-Serio,a planet hat supplies them of bluedust,and Drakh'alahg, one of the only rare planets were tarak grows, thats how they are suppplied of it. Tarak need s an extremly rainforest like wet envoirnment, and lots of shade.the vile hand travels from each planet and have small underground bases on each one to keep watch, nt to mention the possibility of getting raped by many deadly snipers

Bluedust could be the particles gathered from certain sorts of dead, or dying stars, deep in the central parts of the galaxy, where things are exceedingly dangerous, and perilous conditions are abundant.

Rare types of stars, that only die every so often (stars live for a long time afterall) with only a little bit of the Bluedust that comes from such things, found only in certain parts of the galaxy, where radiation, black holes, terrible solar winds, and etc, are a vicious obstacle course for any seeker of the dust.

ok thats seem fair, but bluedust needs to be easily found, or else the vile hand is totally powered down:hohum: here ill change it so its fair, bluedust is a commonly found in galaxies with cold planets, it will gather in caves over time, but is ignored for the soul purpose of it being not that useful, the vile hand however, took advantage of the underuse of this, and fuse it with with the plasma in their suits so it is fortified and has the phasing effect to avert enemy eyes, they dont gether plasma for their selve sbbecuse getting bluedust is enough work, so they simply raid bases with plasma stocks, and mericlessly steal it from anyone who has it, ok?

oh and the rezzing is not god modded bcause in that time, its a 20% percent chance to save the dying man
 
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First off Orc-of-Azeroth absolutly no double and especially no triple posting. There is a shiny edit button for your use you know. Also the way you write. It just makes me think that your really don't give a shit about your race. Makes me thihnk lower of your race. Which I don't think its put together well. What do the rest think.

EDIT: Orc-of-Azeroth seeing now that you have posted 5 times in a row. This is absolutly not acceptable! Theres an edit button.
USE THE DAMN EDIT BUTTON OR GET YOUR ORCISH ASS OUT OF MY THREAD!

Now for the one before Orc-of-Azeroth sacrid I like the race.
The part on reflecting shields isn't that like impossible i've never seen a shield on a ship reflect something.
Overall Its a nice race and will probably be approved after a few twicks. What do yall think.
 
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Wait... they had a choice which galaxy to live in? THEY HAVE INTERGALACTIC TRAVEL!?

Edit: Gath, it's quite easy to reflect light, just about everything that we see does it, maybe the further the angle, the more there is reflected, and the less is absorbed, but there'll always be something that has to be absorbed, and as a result, would weaken the shield.
 
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Yes but every shield i've seen has just been absorb it all. I've never seen one actually reflect the damage. And hes talking reflecting the whole thing by the looks of it.
 
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The good thing is, that the shields are completely open to Kamica's melee ships, and also to projectile weaponry, especially such things as would be found on certain Laminari weapon systems that are prone to flinging crystal fragments at high speed from bio-magnetic rail guns :D

Biological plant like ships are incredible things.

And once the shield generators are down, energy based weapons will have a field day unmatched.
 
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It's not cheap if it only works at a dull angle, look at modern tanks for example, they also sort of like reflect bullets becouse their armor is in an angle.

yes, well, the shields he is using isn't metal. it's energy.

ry guys i havent been on this for awhile, yea i know, but u guys, THE REVIVING POTION COMES FROM TARAK! not bluedust. the vilehand doesnt relly have ships other than stealth fighters and dropships... sry for the sloppiness i just had a brainstorm i didnt want to waste :cry: *runs away to an old hosue and crys in in the corner*

home planet :none, they wander on large dropships like te empire in star wars
They have stealthy, sneaky tech, they can kind of phase out in darkness, etc i guess ill call it shadow tech. they focus on being unseen on the batttle field, but when they are caught, it is hard to get away unless they have some slashers outside, also, ive changed it so slashers have a large machine gun and heavy armor, with a thick helmet.

They have a dictatorship and have 2 controlled planets-Serio,a planet hat supplies them of bluedust,and Drakh'alahg, one of the only rare planets were tarak grows, thats how they are suppplied of it. Tarak need s an extremly rainforest like wet envoirnment, and lots of shade.the vile hand travels from each planet and have small underground bases on each one to keep watch, nt to mention the possibility of getting raped by many deadly snipers



ok thats seem fair, but bluedust needs to be easily found, or else the vile hand is totally powered down:hohum: here ill change it so its fair, bluedust is a commonly found in galaxies with cold planets, it will gather in caves over time, but is ignored for the soul purpose of it being not that useful, the vile hand however, took advantage of the underuse of this, and fuse it with with the plasma in their suits so it is fortified and has the phasing effect to avert enemy eyes, they dont gether plasma for their selve sbbecuse getting bluedust is enough work, so they simply raid bases with plasma stocks, and mericlessly steal it from anyone who has it, ok?

oh and the rezzing is not god modded bcause in that time, its a 20% percent chance to save the dying man

yet i sense that it will still be saving a lot of lives... so... how does one fight a cloaked assassin without any cloaking frequency?!?! D:

The part on reflecting shields isn't that like impossible i've never seen a shield on a ship reflect something.

Only if he can state, scientifically, how it would work... >:3 THEN I'll accept it. Yes, I'm big on science. If they can explain how something works, then that's great. if not... then it seems more like magic..... -.-

Wait... they had a choice which galaxy to live in? THEY HAVE INTERGALACTIC TRAVEL!?

Edit: Gath, it's quite easy to reflect light, just about everything that we see does it, maybe the further the angle, the more there is reflected, and the less is absorbed, but there'll always be something that has to be absorbed, and as a result, would weaken the shield.

except in this case, its energy. Beam cannons send streams of energy at an opposing ship. And, the turrets are like single shot versions of the beam cannon. same energy. :p just in less quantity. Now... how can someone reflect energy-based attacks?
 
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The good thing is, that the shields are completely open to Kamica's melee ships, and also to projectile weaponry, especially such things as would be found on certain Laminari weapon systems that are prone to flinging crystal fragments at high speed from bio-magnetic rail guns :D

Biological plant like ships are incredible things.

And once the shield generators are down, energy based weapons will have a field day unmatched.

Sorry to double post, but its cleaner than a mess of quote and responce D:

Those weapons sound like hell! D: No wonder im losing drones XD
 
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Yes, the automated defenses...and also to a controlled 'nova' of sorts. Like a reverse 'energy shield' that instead of protecting and absorbing, or reflecting damage...it does somewhat the opposite.

I should find an epic name for it. (though it is really something that I will try not to abuse)
 
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you mean, absorbing the energy, pooling them into resovoirs, and sending energy waves back at the enemy, right? One, powerful blast from the gathered energies of the battle. It could be like a nuke, or a super nova :3

Name: Energy Flood-back something (i dunno :/)
 
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well, in the sense they both are energy, yes. But I am talking about energy similer to plasma. A beam of light would be invisible in space, and creates horrible graphics in battles. Instead, a massive stream of energy cutting through the hull of an enemy ship like a giant welder, is more impressive and spreads fear into the enemy >:3 And, the bigger the beam, the more destructive they are, the more fear is placed in the hearts and minds of the enemy! >:D
 
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true, but it does help with the advancements in power generators :p not to mention better subspace warp drives :p (a ship that isn't built for subspace, and has no subspace warp drive, could get torn apart, or otherwise unable to persue a target efficiently :p) So, with multiple generators stashed in the back of the ship, getting more efficient (their like computers. Overtime, laptops become better than most computers :p) and are able to power the shields, weapons, systems of the ship (minus the warp core itself), and even the Drone Hub (which has its own, seperate generator). So, they are able to borrow a bit of energy from the warp core's heat to refuel their own energy if they get close to depletion :p That way, I can keep my deady beam cannons a blazin'! :D
 
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why eliminate money? D: money is a good thing. It stabilizes everything. It there is no money, its back to bartering objects for objects ):

My civilization focuses on the advance of science, and the defense of the free people of the Black Sun empire. the public is free to do as they wish in their lives, or businesses, and the government does not get in the way. The government, under the rule of the admiral (my charecter :p name not revieled for security purposes. Easier to go after a name than a face :p especially when everyone is a bird, and they preen :p). The admiral's goals are the constant improvement of the military and the defence fleet, the exploration of new areas, to allow colonists to spread to new areas in the universe, while still being well defended by the military, and the meetings of other races to develope alliances to further the defence and wellbeing of the people. :3
 
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Well, our civilization is almost completely machinized, only the things that need creativity are still occupied by humans, and the army, but it's more like an honor to be in the army or do a job, than an annoyance, instead, people just do hobbies, and other stuff they want, no jobs though, btw, maintenance man is a VERY honorable job, it's even more honorable than a battleship captain XD.
 
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Well, maintenance is thought better to leave to the people, becouse if there would be some kind of a disaster and all machines in a sector would go down, then maintenance robots can't do it either, and btw, the entire crew of a ship is taught how to repair it.
 
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you can't reflect attacks. That's cheap -.- Still, a 50 angle isn't reflecting, but still, my first sentince is implied. Shields can't deflect any attacks to any angle. Any shield can only absorb damage for the ship
ok, look. It's like aiming a flashlight at an angled mirror. The light beam would reflect. Same thing with the energy. The gas my ships pump out basically form the shield and allow it to reflect. the shield itself absorbs, but the gases allow reflection. how do you guys explain energy shields on ships when the ship is in a bubble and nothing from the ship is touching the shield? How does that shield take shape? Our explanation: High tech. It's beyond our capabilities, and we can't easily explain it. If we could, we'd be able to make things like this already.
The part on reflecting shields isn't that like impossible i've never seen a shield on a ship reflect something.
Well, how do you explain shields absorbing energy if there is no connections from the shield to the ship? Also, how do they make buble shields in the first place? Starr Trek Enterprise probably shows the mst realistic energyshields. You polarize the hull to act as a shield to help protect your ship. lol
 
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New race of SoLmaster

Name: The Immortals
Home Planet: Earth, Different Universe
Controlled Planets: All of that universe and Fredia, Forest Planet.
Life Span: Immortal
Govenrment: Each Immortal Lord own the Immortals and Mortals that enter his Area.
Leader: Immortal Lords are the rulers
Description: Humans that have died once than rose as Immortals. Can't have Children.
Other/History: Once they fought in a game called the gathering. Then the Year 2013, The evil ones killed the good ones and thought that they can own different lands. After most of the humans died out, they created a fleet of ships and took to the stars. After the Conquest of their universe, they turned to the theory of Multiple Universes. But one Group rebelled and came to this universe. They ships look like Protoss/Terran mix.
 
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Absolutly not Sol. Unapproved. The concept of one group owning a whole universe is astronomically impossible. Plus theres only one universe. And the concept of a parallel universe which is what you seem to be discribing is impossible. So no.

But since it wouldn't be fair. Whats everyones thought on this. Better be a good reason to not unapprove this race `.`.
 
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a good amount of systems, yes. An entire universe, hell no -.-

They may be immortal, but a bullet to the head still is a bullt to the head. >:3

Problem with interdimensional travel is: if you are able to go through dimensions, then you can find dimensions without any living spacefairing species, and abundant in minerals, and simply take all the abundant planets as your own. Thus, by then transporting them to other dimensions, you could end up with endless resources, and no one could stop you cause they can't travel dimensions.

Bottom Line: The hell anyone is going to let anyone get such a invincible race. -.- (they can clone, or mutate other species into their own to repopulate)
 
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a bullet to the head... requires lots or surgery to remove it without damaging the brain further. But, a bullet won't be getting stuck in the bone lol it will lodge itself in the brain, and that tends to kill a person, or, at the least make them complete idiots without most of their brain function. Either way, they are still "dead" :p
 
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