Exodus of the Darkfallen

[Resyak]

I like to see a new project around here, I'll try it as soon as I can. If it's your first campaign I advise you to be patient, yes, you should improve the description, that will help people to know what they're going to play.

Regards.

 

[raypack]

Nice potential because of the custom undead race you've created. Keep it up and don't try to do it too custom is my advice. Good luck!

 

[Abdelwahab_khidr_1997]

I like to see a new project around here, I'll try it as soon as I can. If it's your first campaign I advise you to be patient, yes, you should improve the description, that will help people to know what they're going to play.

Regards.

Thanks for your ideas and I will keep them in my mind, I hope u try it as soon as possible to give me your thoughts enjoy

 

[Lordul Dracula]

Ok bugs

Spoiler: Images

Most of the icons don't work

Blood elf?
Also, most of the building descriptions are old undead ones like Ghoul, Necromancer

You can't use this building on the first mission.

 

[Abdelwahab_khidr_1997]

Ok bugs

Spoiler: Images

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Most of the icons don't work
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Blood elf?
Also, most of the building descriptions are old undead ones like Ghoul, Necromancer
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You can't use this building on the first mission.
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Ok bugs

Spoiler: Images

View attachment 404374
Most of the icons don't work
View attachment 404375
Blood elf?
Also, most of the building descriptions are old undead ones like Ghoul, Necromancer
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You can't use this building on the first mission.

Thanks bro, I will fix them as soon as I can. I want to know your opinion about the camping in general.

 

[Lordul Dracula]

Well for your first campaign is not bad but in the future you will have to add new things in your maps (new spells, new enemies, new stories ).

 

[Daffa]

To start off, I like the concept of the faction, but I distaste the fact this is based on the Exodus Tutorial mission. It's very noticeable since I used to assist in the work of one of the re-iteration of that campaign.

1. You never get access to Black Citadel in all base building missions, but the orb requires that to be constructed
2. Searing Arrow, if I recall correctly, interrupts the healing effect of Vampiric Bite
3. Priest's kit is pretty much quite broken for a good micro person since Dark Aegis can be used to keep mana infinite when combined with Devour Magic
4. Sorceress' Sleep ignores the upgrade requirement
5. Footman is very underpowered due to a lack of Defend ability since piercing is a big nightmare for Heavy armor
6. In the original campaign, you were given Demolisher on both missions due to several reasons, but this is most prevalent on the last mission when you have to deal with Siege Golem's Fortified Armor AND Spell Immunity
7. The unit choice is very lackluster, which is VERY noticeable against the Siege Golem since two out of four units you can use cannot attack it

In short, I find this far from Approval worthy at the current stage. A lot of polishing will help a lot in getting this into an approvable quality.

This could come much better with such a lackluster tech tree if the story plot was written purely from scratch since right now this is like replacing Orc with Dark One (or a mini-Undead if one wants to use that term) and call it a campaign. I know the work is not to be taken lightly, but it feels underwhelming at the moment. In addition, I do play all missions that I can make such a conclusion.

 

[HuanJuan]

I liked your little campaign, and this faction is interested me. Because this faction - I know them and remember them as "The Wretched" from another campaign - Alliance Ashes - is interested me the whole time. Sadly, your campaign and the faction are need a little bit of a work around, but I hope we can play this campaign again in better quality.

 

[deepstrasz]

Please use the yellow Edit button at the bottom of your posts and add text there instead of writing one post after another of yours unless it's an important update.
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Also, improve the description and please fix what others have mentioned.

Awaiting Update.

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[deepstrasz]

No updates and no credits list.
Lacking.

 

[XlethinDarkRanger]

Could you kindly PLEASE credit the darkfallen ranger?