Terraining Contest #3 - Four Seasons

[Belgarath]

Zomg new competition, I'm so in. I have a vague idea of what to do..
Is it just me, or are there are only new or newish terrainers in this contest?


edit: winter & autumn wips.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

wow thanks guys will work on it... its my first terrain i'm making for a ''picture'' instead of a game.. i will work more on it for shure.. it wasnt completed but.. because of you i saw things i didnt saw before.. thanks

+rep

 

[frostwhisper]

Zomg new competition, I'm so in. I have a vague idea of what to do..
Is it just me, or are there are only new or newish terrainers in this contest?


edit: winter & autumn wips.

1. Watch yer mouth, I'm in this!
2. Why the heck did you join, now I'm screwed!

 

[Just_Spectating]

lmao, we are all screwed.

 

[frostwhisper]

Except me...

 

[Sabertooth]

And me...
No, wait, I'm still screwed.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

its DRIZZLE, drizzle is light rain .

you cant make DEW in the WE.

 

[ThePunisher]

Terrain Contect Entry

Hey,i want to join the contest and here are my pictures:
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Fourth Picture


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Third picture


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Second Picture



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First Picture

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First Picture:Its Winter(It shows the beginning of the world[The house is representing the world,and it show the "world" in his early beginning.])

Second Picture:Its Spring(Shows The "world" in growing,and the rain represents first life on the "world".)

Third Picture:Its Summer(Presenting The "world" in his best time[Advanced Life,Beautiful Nature and the "big" sea.])

Fourth Picture:Its Autumn(The "world" is getting ancient,and the ending of the "world" is getting closer day by day,year by year...until it disappears.)
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This Message May Change If Needed...
I made every terrain in 20-40 minutes.
I just started doing terrain(So i don`t have high hoping.)
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Made By ThePunisher
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Copyright
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[thedeathunterxx]

i dont get how the story has anything to do with the pictures but, they look good

noticable problems though.
the sky clouds you have do this wierd thing where you can see where it merges.
I suggest rotating the clouds so that you cant see that anymore.

also, your FAR Z is too close. You can see where the cloud sky cuts out of the picture.
increase the FAr z

 

[Volvox]

I'd like to say that it's good but it's not... You should have pressd 'V' for ingame view settings while taking screenshots, your doodads are flying and autumn and winter concepts seem swapped. I suggest you to start from scratch and not to use that house model, it's becoming a cliche.

Edit: Oh and all 4 pics must be taken from the same angle.

 

[Naze]

You need to attach your map to the post.

 

[Belgarath]

Hell, frost, as I if I was going to read 28 pages of stuff. Any feedback

 

[Mr.Goblin]

WIP!! again.. i think i fixed.. the glow.. and now i tryed to do a sunset (first time i'm doing a sunset..)

 

[thedeathunterxx]

freaken awsome

 

[Hawkwing]

Still, that valley is very empty. I see lots of pure grass areas. You need it to be more filled. Also, that sun is lacking any 'glow'. It's just a very heavy yellowish orange ball. A small amount of area surrounding it should be yellowish orange.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

thanks man... really.. your comments are helping me so much!..

 

[Just_Spectating]

overspammed the grass near the house a bit.

 

[Gilles]

ThePunisher, I'm going to need the map as well.

Belgarath, it's good to see you here! You've been missing in action for a while due to that darned wc3crea.

Maybe it's just me, but I'm getting sick and tired of people whining when someone posts work. I realize you may be kidding somewhat, and just letting the user know how much you like his work, but it's getting old.

 

[FamousPker49]

Hmm... I cannot wait for this thing to be over. Everyone looking good, even Belgarath this time. ;P

 

[Hawkwing]

I'll be done mine really shortly, but I'm stuck for ideas. I have no inspiration right now.

 

[Gilles]

Can I get a count of how many people have to finish still?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Ok .. i dont know if its the final version .. but its really really close to it i guest..

heres an other wip.. added some decoration and removed some grass.. (i might need to remove more..) and added some stuff here and there on te valley so its less empty.. i also recolored my ''Water fall river'' XD so it works with the sky...

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk108/Mr_Goblin/NouveauImagebitmap-12.jpg

I NEED COMMENTS D: (sorry Gilles) = cause i dont really care if i win or not.. i'm just doing this competition as an achivement .. cause i never did that kind of terrain ... a terrain for only making a nice picture.... and i do like it how its going.. so i might start my own Terrain gallery!!! (when i said i didnt wanted to win.. well its true.. but for shure i will be really really happy if i do..)

Good job everyone and i'm waiting for your WIP in the folowing post! b(^^)d

 

[Gilles]

Ok .. i dont know if its the final version .. but its really really close to it i guest..

heres an other wip.. added some decoration and removed some grass.. (i might need to remove more..) and added some stuff here and there on te valley so its less empty.. i also recolored my ''Water fall river'' XD so it works with the sky...

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk108/Mr_Goblin/NouveauImagebitmap-12.jpg

I NEED COMMENTS D: (sorry Gilles) = cause i dont really care if i win or not.. i'm just doing this competition as an achivement .. cause i never did that kind of terrain ... a terrain for only making a nice picture.... and i do like it how its going.. so i might start my own Terrain gallery!!! (when i said i didnt wanted to win.. well its true.. but for shure i will be really really happy if i do..)

Good job everyone and i'm waiting for your WIP in the folowing post! b(^^)d

What's the apology for?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well for the Whining that might folow the Wip..

 

[FamousPker49]

The back left mountain, you can see grass creeping over the top, which doesn't make sense if you have the front part of it rocky. Also, your lightpost placement isn't realistic, because the house is too far away to really benefit from it. The hay pile by the house just isn't doing it for me.

Your water looks like it is slapped onto the ground, rather than being a river. The forests you have on your mountains and in the valley look very unnatural. Add small shrubs and stuff in there and have more tile variation there also.

Your grass model you chose is horrid. Please try again.

Your sun is almost good, but you have only the left side of the mountains is lit up, where the right mountain is not. You should also lighten the color of your sun flare, the sun itself is fine, but the light from the sun wouldn't be as thick as the sun itself.

More rocks and animals.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Thanks man.. (b^^.)o

 

[thedeathunterxx]

make the deadline sooner.

i cant wait to see who wins this.

 

[Gilles]

I'll let this go for a few days, if no one speaks up, I'll end it. I am pretty sure there are more to come in. Has Void done anything?

 

[Belgarath]

i r stil finsh nedz lolx

I'll be able to finish it soon, probably Monday. I don't think void has even taken in the existence of this contest

 

[Hawkwing]

I'll let this go for a few days, if no one speaks up, I'll end it. I am pretty sure there are more to come in. Has Void done anything?

I'll have mine up next week, sometime. Hopefully early in the week.

 

[Gilles]

You still have lots of time in my books, it's other users that are so impatient.

 

[Hawkwing]

Well I'm going to be away until Monday, and then I'll do so heavy changes to it.

 

[Belgarath]

Final submission (maybe not)

Well, this is maybe my final submission and maybe not. I'll see later when other people submit theirs
Seasons are: SPRING-SUMMER-AUTUMN-WINTER
The map (as you can see) is Winter.
Feedback please

 

[Just_Spectating]

sorry belg, just not one of your greater projects to be honest.

 

[Belgarath]

I can imagine, I spent around 15-25 minutes on each :/

 

[Mr.Goblin]

i'm not finished! .. the srping is almost done.. than if the spring is done .. the summer will be done at the same time and i guest that the winter and the falls.. my take alot of time... so i will need the dead line.. (i think)

 

[Volvox]

Setting a reasonable deadline just about now would be convenient imo.

 

[frostwhisper]

lolo

 

[AirHead]

haha yeah before goblin whips us all out of terraining. but anyway even though its kinda late for comments much better goblin i think you should have a sideways rays of light doodad behind the sun so it has rays coming at you. other than that famous has already said. well gj. c'mon people be patiant its only the 30th its not like its december just 15 days. oh and belg better but still not great i think the winter is the best or fall but spring and summer if you look on the right side you see the end of the world you should see a forest. and the forest on the right looks ... odd.

oh and goblin its "guess" not "guest" sorry this was killing me and my brother does the same thing other than that you have better english than me and its my native language .

 

[Hawkwing]

I can imagine, I spent around 15-25 minutes on each :/

You participated and you'll surely get some credit for your terrain. That's the upside.

I personally just don't like the idea that much. It seems a bit plain.

haha yeah before goblin whips us all out of terraining.

Don't be too sure. This is anyone's game and someone can still come in at the last moment and take the gold.

 

[Belgarath]

...You cant see the end of the world in any of them... it's always fogged or covered up. By the way, if you could tell me WHY it's not so good would really help a lot...

 

[FamousPker49]

OR someone may already have taken the gold and people have forgotten? (frosty? Me? Someone that people have forgotten?)

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Thats a sad story Famous D: but dont worry i will never forget you and Frosty!

 

[Belgarath]

If they've already been selected, that's a bit sad -_-

 

[Childeric]

Looking good Bel, glad to see you joined. =D

 

[Belgarath]

I was wondering where you were.. have you submitted yours already?

 

[FamousPker49]

He is judging. His messages seem automated lol. It seems oddly familiar to what he said about my terrains. Lol.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

what page did you submit your terrin on famous?

 

[Belgarath]

Who said he had?

 

[FamousPker49]

Here I may update once before the thing is over, but nothing major.