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Captain Griffen:
- Iffy English (comma usage, 'Than' should have been 'Then', etc.)
- Try to use more neutral team colours; bright red is just...out of place.
- Terrain could do with some work, particularly height variation.
- Camera is normally very still; move it around a bit more, keeps it more interesting.
- Lots of moments of boredom, where nothing is being moved foreword. Not helped by predictable plot/lines in places.
However, overall this is pretty good - you definately have potential. Work on making stuff more polished (particularly with move orders - do them individually for best results). You had some nice pieces of cinematic work in here.
- Iffy English (comma usage, 'Than' should have been 'Then', etc.)
- Try to use more neutral team colours; bright red is just...out of place.
- Terrain could do with some work, particularly height variation.
- Camera is normally very still; move it around a bit more, keeps it more interesting.
- Lots of moments of boredom, where nothing is being moved foreword. Not helped by predictable plot/lines in places.
However, overall this is pretty good - you definately have potential. Work on making stuff more polished (particularly with move orders - do them individually for best results). You had some nice pieces of cinematic work in here.