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Hey Shar since you are sort of here i want to tell you,i know this may be nitpicky and im sorry if it is,but i found a few grammar mistakes you may want to fix:
-In the interlude true colours when van Durce talks to Gardon he says ''uselss'''.Fix it so useless.
-In chapter 6 when Queen Kerra talks to Larine she says ''fought for my daughter and no against her''.Fix the no to not.
-In chapter 1 after they leave the murloc village Merlon says it's ''neccesarry''.Fix it to necessary.
-In the prologue and in the description of chapter 1 isn't the word ressources supposed to be with just one s.
-In chapter 3 in the ending cinematic Gardon says neccesary.Yeah,fix it to necessary.
-In the interlude true colours when van Durce talks to Gardon he says ''uselss'''.Fix it so useless.
-In chapter 6 when Queen Kerra talks to Larine she says ''fought for my daughter and no against her''.Fix the no to not.
-In chapter 1 after they leave the murloc village Merlon says it's ''neccesarry''.Fix it to necessary.
-In the prologue and in the description of chapter 1 isn't the word ressources supposed to be with just one s.
-In chapter 3 in the ending cinematic Gardon says neccesary.Yeah,fix it to necessary.
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