-Burning corruption away?I don't know why,but this name sound really weird,it's like we are trying to bring down some kind of government.
-LOL what a timing to feature the kingdom of Rengar,now when will you feature Salria and make it full circle.

-Haha when he was with Blen,Harmos was just the sidekick.Now he got character development and is a main character in this chapter,not in the book,but still good enough.
-Vail is a cool character,i like her way of talking and what she does to fix her ancestors mistakes.She gets an approval from me
-When i found Salomar's hammer i wonder,why didn't sir Edoarus just take it with him?He doesn't like paladins,but he could give it to someone else.Guess he didn't have the power of COMMON SENSE!
-You may want to find a new module for the demon count,because he uses the exact same as the demon lord.
-So much for having to pay,you can just completely skip Progaderas if you wanted to.His flames kind of make it hard to see the items he drops.
-When Taran talks to Harmos he says creatues.Fix it to creatures.
-Why does everyone hate on Gardon,even Harmos.What has he done?
-i thought this chapter was kind of short,but that may just be me.
-Looking forward to the next chapter!Keep up the good work!