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Second Human Book of Arkain (Patch 1.29.2 or newer!)

Submitted by Shar Dundred
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A Campaign Series made by Shar Dundred

! Requires Version 1.29.2 or newer !
You are not allowed to publish any edited version of any Arkain map! This includes but is not limited to Reforged edits!



Story

Betrayed, invaded, defeated.... The Humans of the Empire suffered greatly in their fight against the Demons. They have now lost another kingdom in the war against the Demons and the inner conflicts are just about to start. Only a strong hand and leadership can lead them to victory against these odds.
Command the cruel General Gardon Bloodclaw and unite the estranged factions of the Empire by any means necessary. Withstand your enemies, both inside and outside, and face the horrifying Demons.
The question is... how far are you willing to go for absolute victory? Will you have to sacrifice your humanity in order to achieve victory? Only time will tell.




Campaign Series Info

The Legends of Arkain is a campaign series which takes place on the world Arkain.
The races of Arkain fight against the demon invaders, who try once again to enslave every being on Arkain. The Humans, the Orcs and the Undead will have to make a stand against them... or face complete annihilation or enslavement by the Demons.
This campaign series will consist of actually three different series. There will be a Human, an Orc and an Undead campaign series. They will all run in the same timeline but will present three different stories and outcomes. When they are all finished, it's completely up to you, who wins this conflict.
Those, who win the war, will write the history.


You like the campaign?
Click here to see the progress of the series!

Click here for the First Human Book!
Click here for the First Orc Book!
Click here for the First Undead Book!


Click here for the Second Orc Book!

Let's Play made by @Jayborino!


Features

- Three different storylines/campaign series
Take control of one of the three factions, the proud Humans of the Empire, the plundering and strong Orc Clans or the mysterious Undead Nexus and their endless army of the dead, and face the demonic invasion as well as other struggles that await you.
- New units
Command units, you already know, as well as completely new units with new upgrades and abilities.
- Decide the fate of Arkain
At some points of the campaigns, you'll have the opportunity to decide things, that affect the storyline, characters and sometimes even the chapters you play or how you have to play them. By doing or, well, not doing certain side quests, you can also affect the campaign.
- Three difficulties
You can play the campaign in either easy, normal or hard difficulty, just like in the original WC3 campaigns. It will impact on the AI difficulty and scripting as well as other minor changes.
In easy version, for example, the AI won't rebuilt lost buildings.

- Full Jass AI
In this campaign series, every single AI is written in Jass instead of being created with the AI editor. This makes the AI more intelligent.
- Universal hotkeys
All abilities, units and buildings use QWER hotkeys.
- Race Mechanics
Every available race has its own unique race mechanic to improve gameplay - and, in some cases, to add new ways influencing the story.



Characters

[​IMG] General Gardon Bloodclaw
General Gardon is the most ruthless and merciless general in the Empire. He is known for using every available weapon against his enemies without showing any pardon. His background is a mystery. He simply appeared out of nowhere and became general. He proved very fast, that he got that position for a good reason, destroying the enemies of the Empire with fast, merciless effectiveness. He is the commander of the Ironfist, an elite force of the Empire, which often carries out top secret missions for the Emperor himself. According to rumors, Gardon himself enjoys the favor of the Emperor - much to the frustration of many higher-ranking Imperials. Yet none would dare make a move against him, as in the past, such attempts ended in disaster.
The fact that Gardon was forced to retreat because the inner conflicts of the Imperials had weakened them too much, infuriated him a great deal and he longs for a chance to take revenge on the traitors.
[​IMG] Admiral Merlon Seabright
Both in the Imperial and Royal Fleets, Admiral Merlon Seabright is a living legend. It is said that he was the captain of the ship that killed the Terror of Feraldir, a gigantic, demonic sea monster that had terrorized ships for thousands of years. Merlon dislikes staying on the shore for longer than absolutely necessary, for the sea is his true home. He is said to have been a critic and even an enemy of Gardon Bloodclaw until the two of them were assigned to a special mission. After that mission, Merlon remained silent about Gardon and even proclaimed to assist Gardon whenever he was needed.
Today, he is Gardon's most loyal ally who is not part of the Ironfist.
[​IMG] Larine the Exile
Larine used to be the personal guard and a good friend of the elven queen. However, she began criticizing the fact that the Elves were hiding in their woods instead of fighting side-by-side with the Imperials and Dwarves. She blamed the Queen for the fact that the Elves were despised by many of the Humans who had been forced by their surperiors to defend them. She left the Elven Kingdom and was later exiled. She went to the court of King Dorten of Kerrel and started working for him, gaining his respect. Trained in both archery and nature magic, she is ready to fulfill her surperior's every command.
[​IMG] Lady Cora Redfist
Following her father's wishes reluctantly, Cora joined the Imperial Army instead of continuing her studies in the Imperial Academy. Having proven herself as a valuable asset of the army, she was given the offer of joining the Imperial Navy. She had always loved the sea and knowing that the Imperial Navy would enable her to progress further in her studies of water magic, Cora accepted the offer and became a member of the navy, later serving as the liaison officer between the Imperial Navy and the Golden Guard.
Over time, she developed a certain dislike for Renald van Durce, the general of the Golden Guard, considering him arrogant beyond measure.
[​IMG] Lord Brian the Fallen
Long ago, before the Empire had set sail over the sea, Lord Brian was a high-ranking member of the Emperor's court. People were afraid of the lord in dark armor who was said to study the forbidden dark arts of Shadow Magic. One day, he and his family disappeared without any trace of their whereabouts. Since he didn't return after many years, people started to believe he had died. However, in truth, he had discovered ancient secrets and power. Whatever happened to him, it made him immortal and gave him unknown power and knowledge. It remains a mystery what he has done over the past centuries.
[​IMG] High Lord Inquisitor Renald van Durce
Being one of seven younger brothers of the former emperor and therefore one of the uncles of the current Emperor, Renald could have lived a peaceful life of luxury in the Imperial palace. However, he loathed his other brethren for letting the luxury make them become lazy and corrupt. Becoming a great warrior-priest and leader, he himself led the final assault that removed all Demons from the continent of the Empire. Renald had always been arrogant, but his success made it even worse. However, his loyalty towards the Emperor is almost limitless and only the Emperor himself can command van Durce. Whenever he and his Golden Guard are sent on a mission, the Emperor sends his finest, most loyal and most arrogant soldiers.
His full title is:
High Lord of the Imperial Court, Lord Inquisitor of the Order of the Righteous, Lord Consultant of the Emperor, General of the Golden Guard.



Click here to learn more about the other characters!




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Changelog

Version 1.00
Initial Release

Version 1.10
General:
- After finding out what caused the game to crash in the current iteration of 1.30, I fixed the Angelic unit, selecting it should no longer cause any crashes (Don't worry, I have fixed this with a 1.29 iteration, you do not have to update to the latest patch and I still advise against doing that, but those of you who already patched should be better off now)
- Increased the durability of Lord Brian the Fallen
- Armor of the Holy Bastion now also increases the hit points by 500 in addition to its 15 armor bonus
- Fixed Spears of Pain icon

Chapter Twelve:
- Added Resistant Skin for the Purificator in both A and B

Chapter Thirteen:
- Increased hit points of Krogar the Conqueror by 500

Version 1.20
General:
- Replaced Krogar's Stampede with The Horde, summoning a group of permanent Moghtar warriors
- Praxeus gained the Memory of the Past ability
- Plating no longer increases armor and reflects damage, instead it now reduces all inflicted damage
- Lord of the Shadows no longer splits Brian, instead it allows him to summon up to four permanent Shadow Creatures from corpses
- The amount of trainable Black Dragons is no longer limited to 2, go train more, go nuts
- Replaced Horgar's Barrier ability with Lightning Rune, summoning a rune that attacks enemies
- Changed the model for the Healing Rune
- Horgar and Zarin have both received Spell Resistance
- Changed Gardon's title from Butcher to Warmonger
- Gardon and Praxeus now both have a new permanent item

Chapter Seven:
- Changed a few epilogue lines for the Undead if Larine becomes queen

Chapter Eleven A and B:
- Slightly edited and fixed some dialogues
- Added new dialogues

Chapter Eleven A:
- Fixed the issue with Zarin's portrait not appearing when speaking

Chapter Eleven B:
- Added more enemy Black Dragons and Black Drakes to make sniping the enemy bases with Destructors less efficient

Chapter Twelve A and B:
- Removed the lines coming from the three liches in the intro cinematic

Chapter Fourteen A:
- Salana and Larine may both now call on the Elven Forces (Salana may even call upon a certain hero if she is still alive)

Version 1.21
Prelude:
- Adjusted the lines at the beginning of the map regarding the choice system from the First Human Book

Version 1.22
General:
- Fixed the description of the Old Amulet

Chapter Nine:

- Praxeus should now start with his proper item, the Old Amulet, rather than the Ring of the Exile

Version 1.30
General:
- Fixed the tooltip of Lightning Rune
- Vail's leadership bonus now correctly states that the increase is permanent
- The campaign no longer uses the latest melee patch due to several balance changes messing up things, a few unit changes still apply to the campaign however
- New icon for the Bowman
- Increased the hit points of Knights to 840
- Some grammar fixes
- Dark Secrets now displays the duration
- Fixed the hotkey for Lord of the Shadows

Prelude:
- Fixed the issue with the prelude finishing too early

Interlude Two:
- Fixed the skipping issues related to this cinematic

Chapter Nine:
- The hotkey for sending Marin lumber has been removed

Chapter Thirteen:
- Fixed the tooltip for Korgar's ultimate

Chapter Fourteen A:
- The hint now tells you that Salana/Larine can also summon a wave of allies

Chapter Fourteen B:
- The Old Amulet item should no longer lie on the ground

Version 1.31
General:
- New upgrade "Skull Shield" available from Chapter Seven on

Chapter Eight:
- Replaced most units of the Order of the Flame with new, Order-specific ones

Version 1.32
Chapter Five:
- Replaced the hero in the yellow base with a weaker hero to decrease difficulty

Version 1.40
General:
- Upkeep reworked: Low Upkeep now gives you 8 instead of 7 gold and High Upkeep now gives you 6 instead of 4 gold

Version 1.50 - The Rise of the Shadow
Chapter Seven:
- The items you get from Larine if you chose Salana are now the ones from Chapter Six instead of Chapter Five

Chapter Twelve:
- Replaced the building models used by the Dominion to better showcase their new organisation
- Changed the names of some edited buildings

Chapter Thirteen:
- New model for Orie Redfist
- New model for Red Mages

Chapter Fourteen A:
- Replaced the building models used by the Ironfist to better showcase their new organisation
- Replaced the models used by Peasants and Militia
- Changed the names of some edited buildings

Version 1.60 - The Lands of Arkain
General:
- Most maps now have their own unique loading screen made by @Rhapsodie

Version 1.61
General:
- Shieldbearer Changes:
* Decreased the damage dealt by Shieldbearers by 3
* Decreased hit points from 1500 to 1100
* Increased food cost from 4 to 5
- Reduced the movement speed of Warmechs in air form
- Increased the food cost of Black Dragons from 8 to 10
- All workers now start with Repair activated automatically
- New model & icon for Sir Praxeus "The Holy Bastion" Braelon
- New icon for the Order of the Holy Bastion leadership bonus

Version 1.70 - Father Redfist Update
General:
- Several tweaks and fixes (including changes that fix some bugs caused by newer Blizzard patches)
- Changed & Replaced several unit types and hero models to fit their kingdom/faction
- New models for Thanok & Claire (courtesy of @deepstrasz)
- New model for Shieldbearers (courtesy of @HerrDave)

Chapter Eight:
- Replaced Brutes with Firestarters



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Music:
Bastian Kieslinger - Tears of the Mire (used in Interlude Four)

Campaign Preview Screen:
Heinvers

Campaign Logo:
Mythic

Loading Screens:
Rhapsodie

Campaign Chief Development Tester and Grammar Genius:
Kasrkin

Additional Testing:
Championfighter25

Terrain Improvement:
Imperator (Prologue, Chapter Four, Nine, Eleven, Twelve)
Heinvers (Chapter Three & Chapter Eight)


Everything else made by:
Shar Dundred

First Supporters:
Theoden of KoMe
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Kasrkin
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Heinvers
Imperator
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PlankingWolf


Please contact me via PM if I forgot to give you credit for your resource!


Special Thanks

To Blizzard Entertainment for this great game.
To Turnro and RazorclawX whose great campaigns inspired me to revive this old project.
To all who supported this project!
To all who reported bugs and gave/give constructive feedback both during and after the development!
And very many special thanks to Kasrkin, who supported the creation of this project in many, even countless ways!



Feel free to post your suggestions, opinions and questions!
Please report any bugs!

Keywords:
Arkain, Legends, Legends of Arkain, LoA, campaign, series, Gardon
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Legends of Arkain Second Human Book (Campaign)

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Pick your favorite character

  1. Gardon Bloodclaw

    65.6%
  2. Cora Redfist

    6.7%
  3. Lord Brian the Fallen

    12.9%
  4. Thanok

    9.4%
  5. Duke Volarian Redfist the Tyrant

    3.6%
  6. Merlon Seabright

    5.4%
  7. Lord Marin

    0.9%
  8. King Dorten

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  9. High Lord Inquisitor Renald van Durce

    14.3%
  10. Larine the Exiled

    3.1%
  11. Lord Korras Retka

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  12. Scarlett Retka

    3.1%
  13. Councillor Birram

    0.4%
  14. Queen Renova

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  15. Vail

    1.8%
  16. Lord Harmos the Guardian of the Flame

    1.3%
  17. Sir Praxeus "The Holy Bastion" Braelon

    0.4%
  18. Prince Toraes

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  19. Claire Greendale

    0.9%
  20. Zarin Hammerfall

    1.3%
  21. Horgar Whitebeard

    0.9%
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  1. DD Mikasa

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    Hmmm "MAYBE" you are not up to date with the latest of news but this project is dead :p
     
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    Really, but is not yet buried.
     
  3. DD Mikasa

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    Last time i talked with Shar he made it pretty clear to me that its dead like so dead that even Jesus himself won't be able to bring it back to life
     
  4. Shar Dundred

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    Lies. I said Aridon, never mentioned Jesus.


    I think I'm gonna update this in a few hours or something to
    make Dark Secrets more useful...
     
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    Restore it to its former status?Or you just tweaked the numbers again?
     
  6. Shar Dundred

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    Patience is a virtue, time might tell.
     
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    Being a fan of this project i think i have showed enough patience... xD
     
  8. Shar Dundred

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    Version 0.12 released

    Version 0.12

    - Dark Secrets now increases damage and gives the hero a life-stealing attack instead of regeneration over time
    - Players can no longer skip the Prologue (required to import the choices from the First Book)
     
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    Hi there, Shar. Back in business? And how goes SC2? got the last expansion yet?
     
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    Shar sometimes or always has surprises and he keep them for himself.
     
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    I don't believe the vampiric potion ability that you're basing the dark secrets ability on gives a % attack bonus, rather it just gives a flat bonus...you should change that in the spell description
     
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    While i don”t seee the point for only beta option.
     
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    i like the idea, when can you relese the full version
    greetings from South Africa
     
  14. Shar Dundred

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    I just realized that this campaign was lacking a poll for favorite characters, so I decided
    to add one with the current main cast.

    Feel free to tell me if I forgot someone.

    Also, thanks @Blake8 for telling me of that tooltip bug, fixed it.

    Not really a big thing, so no changelog.
     
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    decided to pick gardon on the assumption that the poll only contains the heroes so far seen in the campaign (but even then some are missing eg aedale but her we only saw once in a cinematic) otherwise... I really don't know
    Most of these we only saw a little of making gardon a favourite at start
    I'm mean at least ones things go to plan... but I fear for gardon once durce finds out
     
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    chap1:
    -Gardon has an imaginary horse or does he have multiple personality disorder? Also: "By Nerzhul!"
    -why are the orcs and the southeastern human base both blue?
    -Dark Secrets does not have the duration written in the description after it is being chosen
    -Weedhunter, eh?
    -so, how did he realize the Murlocs allied with the Orcs. judging by, grass, seaweed, water? Oh, wait, there's a Orc Hunter way in the back of the Murloc base to the south
    -no idea what reward was supposed to be given for eliminating the gold bucketheads but I've taken them down early in the game
    -Murloc genocide
    -wouldn't the Ironfist or something else than the Butcher be more suited for Gardon?

    chap2:
    -so, the Murlocs are allied with the Demons?
    -man, those Murlocs breed like bugs
    -why War before the name of the Murloc troops?
    -at some point in the north, the player's units realize there's a Way Gate or something that leads somewhere near the base and start going through demon territory instead of returning through where the path was cleared indeed, a Way Gate it is; weird thing is that I think there are more than one teleportation point there in the north as two Pit Lords suddenly came from the south after being seen north through the Reveal ability
    -Orb of Demonology is a copy of Orb of Fire with the exception of +1 damage bonus
    -the Golems that are mechanical can be stunned
    -destroying all Demon Gates southwest does not lead to victory; the Shrines must also be destroyed

    interlude:
    -Redfist needs anti-rabies

    chap3:
    -Necromancers, eh?
    -oh ducks, they're teleporting from their base to places again; wouldn't be a problem if they just didn't jump right at your back while trying to go further through an already well guarded strategic place; it's a miracle they're mostly Militia otherwise...; I take that back. Retka's coming from behind with Knights and not only; this is really bad as they cut your reinforcements...; so, either build towers on the road along the way or return with your whole armada every time you want to reinforce it... later building another base; it's not a really a good gameplay design when the map is huge; sure it was fine for the previous level but this...; the good side however is that they don't use catapults to siege, at least yet
    -Executors, Zealots and Crossbowmen have the same soundset
    -Wound Healers look exactly like Chaplains
    -Dessor drops the Legion Doom Horn; I guess later levels won't have Gardon
    -Haste's description is wrong; it says 0%
    -you could QWERTY all spells not just those belonging to heroes
    -fatal error in the Essix base to the west after destroying a Barracks; something repeats it; it's not rare, it's all the time;thus the optional quest can't be finished
    -tiring level without Essix's help

    chap4:

    -for a king the Bone King is weaker than the Cruel One
    -Vindicators and Commanders look alike
    -not sure if they're supposed to see the Stalkers near the Trebouchets or not but they do
    -that Thanok is quite naive; I mean it's obvious that it was Brian's help that got the Ironfist that far; more than that, Brian could dispose of Thanok anytime
    -Shar likes long levels
    -wasn't Retka defeated in the previous level?

    3/5
    because it's a demo and basically should be in the Map Development section.

    EDIT: one more chapter added, also a good one; rating changed to 3.5/5.
     
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  17. DD Mikasa

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    Hey buddy.Maybe its just me but i think you should use spoiler tags...
     
  18. deepstrasz

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    Yeah and also warn that what is supposed to look like a review or comment on the campaign is just that.
     
  19. Shar Dundred

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    I will take a look at it.
     
  20. DD Mikasa

    DD Mikasa

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    Do u even inglish?