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Second Human Book of Arkain (Patch 1.29.2 or newer!)

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A Campaign Series made by Shar Dundred

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Story

Betrayed, invaded, defeated.... The Humans of the Empire suffered greatly in their fight against the Demons. They have now lost another kingdom in the war against the Demons and the inner conflicts are just about to start. Only a strong hand and leadership can lead them to victory against these odds.
Command the cruel General Gardon Bloodclaw and unite the estranged factions of the Empire by any means necessary. Withstand your enemies, both inside and outside, and face the horrifying Demons.
The question is... how far are you willing to go for absolute victory? Will you have to sacrifice your humanity in order to achieve victory? Only time will tell.


Campaign Series Info

The Legends of Arkain is a campaign series which takes place on the world Arkain.
The races of Arkain fight against the demon invaders, who try once again to enslave every being on Arkain. The Humans, the Orcs and the Undead will have to make a stand against them... or face complete annihilation or enslavement by the Demons.
This campaign series will consist of actually three different series. There will be a Human, an Orc and an Undead campaign series. They will all run in the same timeline but will present three different stories and outcomes. When they are all finished, it's completely up to you, who wins this conflict.
Those, who win the war, will write the history.

You like the campaign?
Click here to see the progress of the series!

Click here for the First Human Book!
Click here for the First Orc Book!
Click here for the First Undead Book!


Click here for the Second Orc Book!
Click here for the Second Undead Book!

Let's Play made by @Jayborino!
Features

- Three different storylines/campaign series
Take control of one of the three factions, the proud Humans of the Empire, the plundering and strong Orc Clans or the mysterious Undead Nexus and their endless army of the dead, and face the demonic invasion as well as other struggles that await you.
- New units
Command units, you already know, as well as completely new units with new upgrades and abilities.
- Decide the fate of Arkain
At some points of the campaigns, you'll have the opportunity to decide things, that affect the storyline, characters and sometimes even the chapters you play or how you have to play them. By doing or, well, not doing certain side quests, you can also affect the campaign.
- Three difficulties
You can play the campaign in either easy, normal or hard difficulty, just like in the original WC3 campaigns. It will impact on the AI difficulty and scripting as well as other minor changes.
In easy version, for example, the AI won't rebuilt lost buildings.

- Full Jass AI
In this campaign series, every single AI is written in Jass instead of being created with the AI editor. This makes the AI more intelligent.
- Universal hotkeys
All abilities, units and buildings use QWER hotkeys.
- Race Mechanics
Every available race has its own unique race mechanic to improve gameplay - and, in some cases, to add new ways influencing the story.

Characters

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General Gardon Bloodclaw
General Gardon is the most ruthless and merciless general in the Empire. He is known for using every available weapon against his enemies without showing any pardon. His background is a mystery. He simply appeared out of nowhere and became general. He proved very fast, that he got that position for a good reason, destroying the enemies of the Empire with fast, merciless effectiveness. He is the commander of the Ironfist, an elite force of the Empire, which often carries out top secret missions for the Emperor himself. According to rumors, Gardon himself enjoys the favor of the Emperor - much to the frustration of many higher-ranking Imperials. Yet none would dare make a move against him, as in the past, such attempts ended in disaster.
The fact that Gardon was forced to retreat because the inner conflicts of the Imperials had weakened them too much, infuriated him a great deal and he longs for a chance to take revenge on the traitors.

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Admiral Merlon Seabright
Both in the Imperial and Royal Fleets, Admiral Merlon Seabright is a living legend. It is said that he was the captain of the ship that killed the Terror of Feraldir, a gigantic, demonic sea monster that had terrorized ships for thousands of years. Merlon dislikes staying on the shore for longer than absolutely necessary, for the sea is his true home. He is said to have been a critic and even an enemy of Gardon Bloodclaw until the two of them were assigned to a special mission. After that mission, Merlon remained silent about Gardon and even proclaimed to assist Gardon whenever he was needed.
Today, he is Gardon's most loyal ally who is not part of the Ironfist.

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Larine the Exile
Larine used to be the personal guard and a good friend of the elven queen. However, she began criticizing the fact that the Elves were hiding in their woods instead of fighting side-by-side with the Imperials and Dwarves. She blamed the Queen for the fact that the Elves were despised by many of the Humans who had been forced by their surperiors to defend them. She left the Elven Kingdom and was later exiled. She went to the court of King Dorten of Kerrel and started working for him, gaining his respect. Trained in both archery and nature magic, she is ready to fulfill her surperior's every command.

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Lady Cora Redfist
Following her father's wishes reluctantly, Cora joined the Imperial Army instead of continuing her studies in the Imperial Academy. Having proven herself as a valuable asset of the army, she was given the offer of joining the Imperial Navy. She had always loved the sea and knowing that the Imperial Navy would enable her to progress further in her studies of water magic, Cora accepted the offer and became a member of the navy, later serving as the liaison officer between the Imperial Navy and the Golden Guard.
Over time, she developed a certain dislike for Renald van Durce, the general of the Golden Guard, considering him arrogant beyond measure.

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Lord Brian the Fallen
Long ago, before the Empire had set sail over the sea, Lord Brian was a high-ranking member of the Emperor's court. People were afraid of the lord in dark armor who was said to study the forbidden dark arts of Shadow Magic. One day, he and his family disappeared without any trace of their whereabouts. Since he didn't return after many years, people started to believe he had died. However, in truth, he had discovered ancient secrets and power. Whatever happened to him, it made him immortal and gave him unknown power and knowledge. It remains a mystery what he has done over the past centuries.

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High Lord Inquisitor Renald van Durce
Being one of seven younger brothers of the former emperor and therefore one of the uncles of the current Emperor, Renald could have lived a peaceful life of luxury in the Imperial palace. However, he loathed his other brethren for letting the luxury make them become lazy and corrupt. Becoming a great warrior-priest and leader, he himself led the final assault that removed all Demons from the continent of the Empire. Renald had always been arrogant, but his success made it even worse. However, his loyalty towards the Emperor is almost limitless and only the Emperor himself can command van Durce. Whenever he and his Golden Guard are sent on a mission, the Emperor sends his finest, most loyal and most arrogant soldiers.
His full title is:
High Lord of the Imperial Court, Lord Inquisitor of the Order of the Righteous, Lord Consultant of the Emperor, General of the Golden Guard.

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Initial Release

General:
- After finding out what caused the game to crash in the current iteration of 1.30, I fixed the Angelic unit, selecting it should no longer cause any crashes (Don't worry, I have fixed this with a 1.29 iteration, you do not have to update to the latest patch and I still advise against doing that, but those of you who already patched should be better off now)
- Increased the durability of Lord Brian the Fallen
- Armor of the Holy Bastion now also increases the hit points by 500 in addition to its 15 armor bonus
- Fixed Spears of Pain icon

Chapter Twelve:
- Added Resistant Skin for the Purificator in both A and B

Chapter Thirteen:
- Increased hit points of Krogar the Conqueror by 500

General:
- Replaced Krogar's Stampede with The Horde, summoning a group of permanent Moghtar warriors
- Praxeus gained the Memory of the Past ability
- Plating no longer increases armor and reflects damage, instead it now reduces all inflicted damage
- Lord of the Shadows no longer splits Brian, instead it allows him to summon up to four permanent Shadow Creatures from corpses
- The amount of trainable Black Dragons is no longer limited to 2, go train more, go nuts
- Replaced Horgar's Barrier ability with Lightning Rune, summoning a rune that attacks enemies
- Changed the model for the Healing Rune
- Horgar and Zarin have both received Spell Resistance
- Changed Gardon's title from Butcher to Warmonger
- Gardon and Praxeus now both have a new permanent item

Chapter Seven:
- Changed a few epilogue lines for the Undead if Larine becomes queen

Chapter Eleven A and B:
- Slightly edited and fixed some dialogues
- Added new dialogues

Chapter Eleven A:
- Fixed the issue with Zarin's portrait not appearing when speaking

Chapter Eleven B:
- Added more enemy Black Dragons and Black Drakes to make sniping the enemy bases with Destructors less efficient

Chapter Twelve A and B:
- Removed the lines coming from the three liches in the intro cinematic

Chapter Fourteen A:
- Salana and Larine may both now call on the Elven Forces (Salana may even call upon a certain hero if she is still alive)

Prelude:
- Adjusted the lines at the beginning of the map regarding the choice system from the First Human Book

General:
- Fixed the description of the Old Amulet

Chapter Nine:
- Praxeus should now start with his proper item, the Old Amulet, rather than the Ring of the Exile

General:
- Fixed the tooltip of Lightning Rune
- Vail's leadership bonus now correctly states that the increase is permanent
- The campaign no longer uses the latest melee patch due to several balance changes messing up things, a few unit changes still apply to the campaign however
- New icon for the Bowman
- Increased the hit points of Knights to 840
- Some grammar fixes
- Dark Secrets now displays the duration
- Fixed the hotkey for Lord of the Shadows

Prelude:
- Fixed the issue with the prelude finishing too early

Interlude Two:
- Fixed the skipping issues related to this cinematic

Chapter Nine:
- The hotkey for sending Marin lumber has been removed

Chapter Thirteen:
- Fixed the tooltip for Korgar's ultimate

Chapter Fourteen A:
- The hint now tells you that Salana/Larine can also summon a wave of allies

Chapter Fourteen B:
- The Old Amulet item should no longer lie on the ground

General:
- New upgrade "Skull Shield" available from Chapter Seven on

Chapter Eight:
- Replaced most units of the Order of the Flame with new, Order-specific ones

Chapter Five:
- Replaced the hero in the yellow base with a weaker hero to decrease difficulty

General:
- Upkeep reworked: Low Upkeep now gives you 8 instead of 7 gold and High Upkeep now gives you 6 instead of 4 gold

Chapter Seven:
- The items you get from Larine if you chose Salana are now the ones from Chapter Six instead of Chapter Five

Chapter Twelve:
- Replaced the building models used by the Dominion to better showcase their new organisation
- Changed the names of some edited buildings

Chapter Thirteen:
- New model for Orie Redfist
- New model for Red Mages

Chapter Fourteen A:
- Replaced the building models used by the Ironfist to better showcase their new organisation
- Replaced the models used by Peasants and Militia
- Changed the names of some edited buildings

General:
- Most maps now have their own unique loading screen made by @Rhapsodie

General:
- Shieldbearer Changes:
* Decreased the damage dealt by Shieldbearers by 3
* Decreased hit points from 1500 to 1100
* Increased food cost from 4 to 5
- Reduced the movement speed of Warmechs in air form
- Increased the food cost of Black Dragons from 8 to 10
- All workers now start with Repair activated automatically
- New model & icon for Sir Praxeus "The Holy Bastion" Braelon
- New icon for the Order of the Holy Bastion leadership bonus

General:
- Several tweaks and fixes (including changes that fix some bugs caused by newer Blizzard patches)
- Changed & Replaced several unit types and hero models to fit their kingdom/faction
- New models for Thanok & Claire (courtesy of @deepstrasz)
- New model for Shieldbearers (courtesy of @HerrDave)

Chapter Eight:
- Replaced Brutes with Firestarters

General:
- New model for Duke Redfist (courtesy of @Rhapsodie)

General:
- New model for Sir Jay Bubblerino (courtesy of @deepstrasz )

Chapter Eleven:
- Fixed the loading screen of Chapter Eleven

General:
- Fixed the food cost for Black Dragons (was 8, should have been 10)
- Fixed the button positions of Dragonhawk Riders and their Cloud upgrade



Models & Skins:
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Music:
Bastian Kieslinger - Tears of the Mire (used in Interlude Four)

Campaign Preview Screen:
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Campaign Logo:
Mythic

Loading Screens:
Rhapsodie

Campaign Chief Development Tester and Grammar Genius:
Kasrkin

Additional Testing:
Championfighter25

Terrain Improvement:
Imperator (Prologue, Chapter Four, Nine, Eleven, Twelve)
Heinvers (Chapter Three & Chapter Eight)


Everything else made by:
Shar Dundred

First Supporters:
Theoden of KoMe
Chen
youness
Kasrkin
kakuzu
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Heinvers
Imperator
Veritas 117
PlankingWolf


Please contact me via PM if I forgot to give you credit for your resource!



To Blizzard Entertainment for this great game.
To Turnro whose great campaigns inspired me to revive this old project.
To Jayborino for his enjoyable let's play projects of the Arkain series!
To all who supported this project!
To all who reported bugs and gave/give constructive feedback both during and after the development!
And very many special thanks to Kasrkin, who supported the creation of this project in many, even countless ways!



Feel free to post your suggestions, opinions and questions!
Please report any bugs!

Keywords:
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Legends of Arkain Second Human Book (Campaign)

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If they co-exist with the humans and they fill they're weakness of being short-sighted the orcs can easily become the strongest race.(and yes i think they can ever surpass the undead)

I don't know. Imperials have the technological and magical advantage and the undead can bolster their forces with any dead and are "biologically" immortal (they can die, but are not affected by age, disease, weather, fatigue)
 
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You can always burn em to hell,Demons used this type of methode on the corpses.Oh and ORCS were supposed to be the Strongest race untill Shar scraped the idea.
 
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I don't know. Imperials have the technological and magical advantage and the undead can bolster their forces with any dead and are "biologically" immortal (they can die, but are not affected by age, disease, weather, fatigue)
Well you see the orcs mentioned they should do a gigantic oversea raid/invasion.Now if they do one on the empire and aren't short-sighted and destoy everything they can study imperial technology and benefit from that massively.Thats atleast why i think they can become the strongest race.I respect everyones opinion and everyone makes strong points.I know im not a 100% right,don't worry.
 
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You can always burn em to hell,Demons used this type of methode on the corpses.Oh and ORCS were supposed to be the Strongest race untill Shar scraped the idea.

Yeah but can they burn the corpses all around Arkain? The undead have access to tunnels and most likely portals.

What about political terms? The orcs are only united because of Rangul and were divided till then. I bet many are now resentful since Rangul's plans made most of the clans lose their chieftains and part of their forces at the hands of humans, undeads and demons. If Rangul dies, that whole union of clans will fall apart in a matter of days.
 
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Sorry,but i cannot take the cinematic seriously.Actually Gardon's marriage can be the best scene in the game just imagine:
Priest:We have gathered here today...
Gardon:YES TO MARRY,JUST MAKE IT QUICK I HAVE NO PATIENCE
Priest:Ok...do you Gardon...
Gardon:ITS KING GARDON YOU IDIOT AND YES I ACCEPT
Priest:Ok...And do you princess
Gardon:OFCOURSE SHE ACCEPTS YOU MORON,NO ONE DEFIES ME
Priest:Then i declare you Husband and wife untill...
Gardon:SHE TRIES TO BETRAY ME BUT IT WONT HAPPEN BECAUSE OF THE AMULET I GAVE HER
Priest:...you can now kiss you're love
Gardon:I HAVE A HELMET.NOW SINCE THIS IS OVER LETS GO TO WAR.
 
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Sorry,but i cannot take the cinematic seriously.Actually Gardons marriage can be the best scene in the game just imagine.
Priest:We have gathered here today...
Gardon:YES TO MARRY,JUST MAKE IT QUICK I HAVE NO PATIENCE
Priest:Ok...do you Gardon...
Gardon:ITS KING GARDON YOU IDIOT AND YES I ACCEPT
Priest:Ok...And do you princess
Gardon:OFCOURSE SHE ACCEPTS YOU MORON,NO ONE DEFIES ME
Priest:Then i declare you Husband and wife untill...
Gardon:SHE TRIES TO BETRAY ME BUT IT WONT HAPPEN BECAUSE OF THE AMULET I GAVE HER
Priest:...you can now kiss you're love
Gardon:I HAVE A HELMET.NOW SINCE THIS IS OVER LETS GO TO WAR.

And their honeymoon moon occurs in a beautiful castle...surrounded by a burning city and a lot of corpses in the streets.:)
 
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Just forgot to add that after the marriage Gardon gets his ultimate honeymoon gift-The imaginary horse that he doesn't shut up about.(i don't know how many people will get this joke,but im still posting it)And if you're wondering about the princess...she gets nothing Gardon needs the money to produce destructors.Now how the Honeymoon will go i have no idea.I hope Shar and Kasrkin make a good story out of it.
 
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Just forgot to add that after the marriage Gardon gets his ultimate honeymoon gift-The imaginary horse that he doesn't shut up about.(i don't know how many people will get this joke,but im still posting it)And if you're wondering about the princess...she gets nothing Gardon needs the money to produce destructors.Now how the Honeymoon will go i have no idea.I hope Shar and Kasrkin make a good story out of it.

As long it doesn't end up like the Red Wedding...If it were to end like the Purple Wedding though...:)
 
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@LISBOAH Don't worry Gardon only kills the priest for not going fast enough.Everything else is fine...for now.
Yes i know i said i was not going to do the honeymoon,but i did the marriage so why not both?
Gardon and his ''love'' were on they're honeymoon.Merlon was the captain of the all inclusive cruise.
His wife was with her veil so Gardon couldn't see her.He wanted to know who it was,since he just chose her on the go.
So it was finally time to see,was it the princess of Toran,maybe Pyrru.He didn't really care,but he atleast wanted to see what she looks like.
So he called all the boys to see the epic reveal.
Gardon:Alright you idiots,now you will see my wife.I don't really care about her since she isn't my true love.IS THAT CLEAR?
EVERYONE:YES,KING GARDON!!
Gardon:Good now it's time *lifts the veil*
Renald Van Durce:ITS ME GARDON.
Brian:AWWWW,SON OF A BITCH!!!
Renald Van Durce:ITS ME GARDON.IT WAS ME ALL ALONG GARDON.
Gardon: DAMN I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS!!!!
Renald Van Durce:I TRICKED YOU ALL,I TRICKED YOU ALL,EVEN ARIDON,EVEN THE ALL KNOWING ARIDON THOUGHT I WAS YOUR WIFE.
I DIDNT WANNA DO IT,JUST KIDDING I ALWAYS WANTED TO DO IT,THEY DONT CALL ME RENALD VAN DOUCHE FOR NOTHING.
NOW SINCE YOU'RE HEART BROKEN I WILL TELEPORT AWAY
Gardon:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA you know what when i atleast kill you i will laugh,because you think i actually care.
Renald Van Durce: DAMN YOU GARDON.THIS WAS NOT PART OF THE PLAN.*Teleports away*
Gardon:WELL NEXT TIME I WILL SEE MY WIFE BEFORE I MARRY HER.WHO WAS THE IDIOT WHO WANTED A FAST MARRIAGE?
Merlon:Ummm,Gardon it was you.
Gardon:WELL SINCE YOU TOLD ME THAT YOURE DEMOTED,SEAMAN RECRUIT SEABRIGHT.NOW SINCE THIS IS OVER LETS GO TO WAR AGAIN

For everyone who doesn't know Seaman Recruit is the lowest rank in the US navy
 
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Damn you... D:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH..... HAHAHAHARGTSENTRYJRNRZDNT

When you look at this situation from anyone else's perspective it would possibly be the greatest day of their life, but from King Gardon Bloodclaw's perspective it all seemed to be such a grand waste. The most impressive cathedral was found painstakingly restored for a ceremony that is pretty much a political show, his most important officers that could be pulled from their duties were all here, did he mention the amount of people here? Well he should have, there is an incredible amount of people here, his subjects, idly wondering how many were spies and if they would try anything. It would certainly make this farce interesting if one of enemies tried to have him killed.
'Tried'
Merlon made the suggestion that he should paint his armor a mix of white and black since no one ever sees him without it. Surprisingly even the cold void that was Thanok laughed at this, a passing memory comes to the front, didn't they despise eachother during the war? Unimportant, there hasn't been an issue.
Standing at the altar for such a long time how much longer was this going to take? He could have killed a Demonlord in the amount of time he was being forced to wait. Hmm, how did those wretches all seem to have the ability to bring themselves back from death at least once? The experience must be painful, your body goes through complete failure and then you come right back right as rain. Possible torture technique if it's not just a one time deal.
Ridiculous, his foremost officers were all sitting in the first rows. Looking at them he could see the smiling and laughing if not physically then in their eyes. Laugh it up, this won't last forever.
...This was taking forever, he turned and glared at the "priest" no not the combat healer a certified individual with the authority to marry people off. The priest had the audacity to shrug at the King, this was how it usually went no point in complaining.
Perhaps they all had certification in these matters, he never really asked.
Perhaps an infernal will come crashing through the roof or something, just make this waiting---
*The music begins once more.*
Finally, and with this thought on his mind the whole cathedral turns towards the isle and the bride.
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"Hmm, she's adequate." Perhaps this seems ridiculously underwhelming but he has served with the best of the best of the known world and fought the most deadly of enemies. One more woman that was stunningly beautiful that could stop a man's heart at a glance was just another day to him.
Did he say that out loud, perhaps, the priest is staring in disbelief at him. Irrelevant it's time to get this show on the road, he had a kingdom to rule and had to get back to it.
The priest seemed to get over his disbelief as she got near the altar. Without a word she and Gardon's hands came together and they walked forward together.
"I can't believe I lost that bet."
"I told you it was a political show, now pay up."
The priest went through the usual routine, and he said I do and she said I do whenever it was needed but when the moment finally came to kiss the bride he looked into her eyes.
Ambition, pride, perhaps a hint of cruelty she could be a challenge to him and easily be proclaimed a hero by the known world if she just killed him. Perhaps he did indeed find some sort of equal, another passing thought came to the forefront could he possibly love this woman? It seems to be a real possibility at this point, if she was to reign with him there would always be the distinct possibility that his world could come crashing down. Years of work, of happenstance, of suffering all by the means of a woman who was much more than she appeared.
Her eyes were searching his as well, perhaps she found something worthwile because she smirked.
And with anticipation in the air nearing a breaking point they finally came together to kiss, with actual feeling it seems.
Several mages dropped their crystals that were recording the wedding, enemy spies did not know how they were going to report this to their commands, and the people oh the people didn't believe what they were seeing.
But in the midst in all of this a man in the first row began to laugh, his insane laugh sounded like a dozen voices at once and with barely any control of his own humor Lord Brian the Fallen said, "Alright, assholes pay up I WON THE BET!"


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No this isn't canon, I just wrote this in one go cause I could.
 
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH..... HAHAHAHARGTSENTRYJRNRZDNT

When you look at this situation from anyone else's perspective it would possibly be the greatest day of their life, but from King Gardon Bloodclaw's perspective it all seemed to be such a grand waste. The most impressive cathedral was found painstakingly restored for a ceremony that is pretty much a political show, his most important officers that could be pulled from their duties were all here, did he mention the amount of people here? Well he should have, there is an incredible amount of people here, his subjects, idly wondering how many were spies and if they would try anything. It would certainly make this farce interesting if one of enemies tried to have him killed.
'Tried'
Merlon made the suggestion that he should paint his armor a mix of white and black since no one ever sees him without it. Surprisingly even the cold void that was Thanok laughed at this, a passing memory comes to the front, didn't they despise eachother during the war? Unimportant, there hasn't been an issue.
Standing at the altar for such a long time how much longer was this going to take? He could have killed a Demonlord in the amount of time he was being forced to wait. Hmm, how did those wretches all seem to have the ability to bring themselves back from death at least once? The experience must be painful, your body goes through complete failure and then you come right back right as rain. Possible torture technique if it's not just a one time deal.
Ridiculous, his foremost officers were all sitting in the first rows. Looking at them he could see the smiling and laughing if not physically then in their eyes. Laugh it up, this won't last forever.
...This was taking forever, he turned and glared at the "priest" no not the combat healer a certified individual with the authority to marry people off. The priest had the audacity to shrug at the King, this was how it usually went no point in complaining.
Perhaps they all had certification in these matters, he never really asked.
Perhaps an infernal will come crashing through the roof or something, just make this waiting---
*The music begins once more.*
Finally, and with this thought on his mind the whole cathedral turns towards the isle and the bride.
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"Hmm, she's adequate." Perhaps this seems ridiculously underwhelming but he has served with the best of the best of the known world and fought the most deadly of enemies. One more woman that was stunningly beautiful that could stop a man's heart at a glance was just another day to him.
Did he say that out loud, perhaps, the priest is staring in disbelief at him. Irrelevant it's time to get this show on the road, he had a kingdom to rule and had to get back to it.
The priest seemed to get over his disbelief as she got near the altar. Without a word she and Gardon's hands came together and they walked forward together.
"I can't believe I lost that bet."
"I told you it was a political show, now pay up."
The priest went through the usual routine, and he said I do and she said I do whenever it was needed but when the moment finally came to kiss the bride he looked into her eyes.
Ambition, pride, perhaps a hint of cruelty she could be a challenge to him and easily be proclaimed a hero by the known world if she just killed him. Perhaps he did indeed find some sort of equal, another passing thought came to the forefront could he possibly love this woman? It seems to be a real possibility at this point, if she was to reign with him there would always be the distinct possibility that his world could come crashing down. Years of work, of happenstance, of suffering all by the means of a woman who was much more than she appeared.
Her eyes were searching his as well, perhaps she found something worthwile because she smirked.
And with anticipation in the air nearing a breaking point they finally came together to kiss, with actual feeling it seems.
Several mages dropped their crystals that were recording the wedding, enemy spies did not know how they were going to report this to their commands, and the people oh the people didn't believe what they were seeing.
But in the midst in all of this a man in the first row began to laugh, his insane laugh sounded like a dozen voices at once and with barely any control of his own humor Lord Brian the Fallen said, "Alright, assholes pay up I WON THE BET!"


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SY8xhLDDLQo


No this isn't canon, I just wrote this in one go cause I could.

Loved it. Glad to see another Hyrule Total War fan, by the way.
 
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Good job Karskin that was beautiful,no betrayals,no shouting,only perfect writing.My only problem is that you should have written about the honeymoon,well i guess we can expect a part 2?
 
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WTF are you thinking?Why isn't her father part of the redemption story.Him saying sorry will be the beginning of end times or should i say THE END OF DAYS.She needs him...wait what am i talking about,still you can't do it without her father.
 
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Gentlemen, I will now give you the first spoiler for the hot chapter.

Here you have a main character of that chapter.
You liked him, you missed him, you always wanted to see him as more than just Greymoore's sidekick.
BEHOLD
full

HARMOS - THE GUARDIAN OF THE FLAME

Returning to put some monsters ablaze!

Oh, and do not worry, he is not the only fire-related in that chapter...
 
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Since we are into romances now, what about Salana and Larine? Both fought by Gardon´s side, challenged the elven queen, you know, the stuff. And the events of Long live the queen makes me think Salana wants Larine all for herself.
 
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Nah, its a trap! They will wrap her as a gift for the queen. There is a lot of empty space in the elven palace now after all.
 

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Sorry,but i cannot take the cinematic seriously.Actually Gardon's marriage can be the best scene in the game just imagine:
Priest:We have gathered here today...
Gardon:YES TO MARRY,JUST MAKE IT QUICK I HAVE NO PATIENCE
Priest:Ok...do you Gardon...
Gardon:ITS KING GARDON YOU IDIOT AND YES I ACCEPT
Priest:Ok...And do you princess
Gardon:OFCOURSE SHE ACCEPTS YOU MORON,NO ONE DEFIES ME
Priest:Then i declare you Husband and wife untill...
Gardon:SHE TRIES TO BETRAY ME BUT IT WONT HAPPEN BECAUSE OF THE AMULET I GAVE HER
Priest:...you can now kiss you're love
Gardon:I HAVE A HELMET.NOW SINCE THIS IS OVER LETS GO TO WAR.
Damn you... D:

Believe it or not, but this is more or less the way such a marriage was depicted in Abel Gance's Bonaparte et la Révolution (1971). Minus that amulet stuff part, of course.

"[...] Napoleon visits Joséphine daily. [...] In trade for agreeing to marry Napoleon, Joséphine demands of Barras that he place Napoleon in charge of the French Army of Italy. [...]

Napoleon plans to invade Italy. He wishes to marry Joséphine as quickly as possible before he leaves. Hurried preparations go forward. However, on the wedding day, 9 March 1796, Napoleon is two hours late. He is found in his room planning the Italian campaign, and the wedding ceremony is rushed. That night, Violine and Joséphine both prepare for the wedding bed. Violine prays to a shrine of Napoleon. Joséphine and Napoleon embrace at the bed. [...]

Only 48 hours after his wedding, Napoleon leaves Paris in a coach for Nice. [..] Napoleon speeds to Albenga on horseback to find the army officers resentful and the soldiers starving. [...] The Army of Italy is newly filled with fighting spirit. Napoleon encourages them for the coming campaign into Italy, the "honour, glory and riches" which will be theirs upon victory. [...]"



More about the original version, also by Abel Gance, and its many versions that followed:
Napoléon (1927 film) - Wikipedia

Gardon was supposed to find true love untill Shar scrapped the idea.Sorry i just had to say it.:D:D

Since I can not find any suitable excerpt of the film(s) mentioned above, this will sadly have to do:

 
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Well did the marriage end with the woman revealing herself to be a man and his biggest enemy?
Jokes aside though a very interesting read.
Gardon and Napoleon actually even have one thing in common,they can conquer an entire continent if they wanted to but can never find true love.
 
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Well did the marriage end with the woman revealing herself to be a man and his biggest enemy?
Jokes aside though a very interesting read.
Gardon and Napoleon actually even have one thing in common,they can conquer an entire continent if they wanted to but can never find true love.

Yeah, Napoleon conquered an entire continent, but ended up exiled twice and died on an isolated island.
 
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@Shar Dundred
So who is the Monster were referring to? Is the world's best dad, someone you hasn't come into the picture yet, or am I missing something and need some catching up to do?
The monster isn't refered as of yet.I think it's the terror of Feraldir,if the words '' gigantic, demonic sea monster'' don't give it away i don't know what does.The easiest bet is Aedale's father though.
 
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Sorry guys but the title of World's greatest dad has been officially taken long ago

By this guy
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@Verb8im Shar mentioned he replaced Zarin with Merlon since Merlon is more of a main character than Zarin.I remember him writing that somewhere.That doesn't exclude his return though.Only time will tell.
Did Shar read what the name Renald means from this site:The meaning of name Rénald and origin and just decided to turn every positive thing about it into the opposite?Because Van Durce is everything,except what his first name's meaning is:D.
 
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