Lich King's Journey in Silverpine Forest

[deepstrasz]

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[Warcraft Sandbox]

This is the proof that I own this map's Github repo: update READ to include link to Hive Workshop · pqhuy98/Warcraft3@e3e4e13

 

[puck]

I dont know how to finish the task of rabbit and sheep,I kill all rabbit but nothing happen,and sheep are always moving.

 

[Warcraft Sandbox]

I dont know how to finish the task of rabbit and sheep,I kill all rabbit but nothing happen,and sheep are always moving.

For rabbit quest, all rabbits in these 2 wheat's field regions must be gone. Might be there are some rabbits re-enter the region that you didn't see?

And for sheep quest, yeah it can be quite difficult if the sheeps are scattered. You can try pushing them all roughly near the boy first (but not necessarily close enough), then individually push each sheeps to be within the required radius. Gradually reducing the circle's radius.

 

[deepstrasz]

1. The map thread description doesn't say much of anything about the gameplay or story. The story doesn't really make any sense. The Lich King helping the humans with chore quests?
2. The hero maxes his spells at the elven brewer trials. Overall, quite ability spam; the tornado unit waves were the hardest part except the last. From there on you can pretty much kill anything on the map.
3. Would be nice to not spam the quest log with the same quest (elven brewer one); so rather than that, change/update the quest's requirement.
4. Some enemies appear between doodads in the brewer's trials.
5. Not sure how to escort John and Peter to the lumber mill. They don't do anything. Clicking on them when near they seem to want to follow you as they turn to face the hero but they don't move. It seems to be because I've destroyed the undead base before getting to that part of the quest...
6. Can buy ship from enemy shipyards.

Approved. It's a nice little thing but seems incomplete.

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1. The map thread description doesn't say much of anything about the gameplay or story. The story doesn't really make any sense. The Lich King helping the humans with chore quests?
2. The hero maxes his spells at the elven brewer trials. Overall, quite ability spam; the tornado unit waves were the hardest part except the last. From there on you can pretty much kill anything on the map.
3. Would be nice to not spam the quest log with the same quest (elven brewer one); so rather than that, change/update the quest's requirement.
4. Some enemies appear between doodads in the brewer's trials.
5. Not sure how to escort John and Peter to the lumber mill. They don't do anything. Clicking on them when near they seem to want to follow you as they turn to face the hero but they don't move. It seems to be because I've destroyed the undead base before getting to that part of the quest...
6. Can buy ship from enemy shipyards.

Approved. It's a nice little thing but seems incomplete.

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Thank you for your valuable review. Indeed the Lich King story doesn't make sense, I will think about reverting back to a normal main hero.

You mentioned John and Peter didn't go to the lumber mill? Was it after or before they speak to the knight? Seems like a rare bug I never encountered. It's a shame that your playthrough stuck there, that quest belongs to the main questline, which means probably you miss 5-6 quests.

 

[deepstrasz]

Thank you for your valuable review. Indeed the Lich King story doesn't make sense, I will think about reverting back to a normal main hero.

I'm not saying it can't be a hidden good hearted undead or something but from my perspective, storywise the Lich King wouldn't do this and the people wouldn't simply welcome him.

You mentioned John and Peter didn't go to the lumber mill? Was it after or before they speak to the knight? Seems like a rare bug I never encountered. It's a shame that your playthrough stuck there, that quest belongs to the main questline, which means probably you miss 5-6 quests.

It was at the part where they are near the knight. I have a strong feeling it may be related to the fact that I destroyed most of everything on the map before starting that part of the quest. The hero is overpowered after the elf's trials which are not that hard to do in the first place, not requiring you to come back later when you're stronger or anything like that.
Generally, you could either make more heroes to choose from or try making some replayability by having more abilities to choose from or something to customize your hero with after choosing all spell levels.

 

[1storm1]

In version 2.0, when I click Footman Rick, the game does not trigger mission story . Is it a bug or just because the update.

 

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In version 2.0, when I click Footman Rick, the game does not trigger mission story . Is it a bug or just because the update.

That is very strange, must be some bug from the map. I tried to reproduce on my computer with Warcraft 3 Reforged 2.0 and it works. Did you use Reforged setting or Classic?

Anyway the Footman Rick's dialogue is optional.

 

[1storm1]

That is very strange, must be some bug from the map. I tried to reproduce on my computer with Warcraft 3 Reforged 2.0 and it works. Did you use Reforged setting or Classic?

Anyway the Footman Rick's dialogue is optional.

sry,my bad.I keep using the left mouse button in most maps, not noticed the right .